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AkimaDoll [2011-06-19 21:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Lovely muted pallete and use of a larger aperture, but the composition looks a little bland to my eye.
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luckydesigns In reply to AkimaDoll [2011-06-20 01:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! What would you do to improve the composition?
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AkimaDoll In reply to luckydesigns [2011-06-20 03:21:49 +0000 UTC]
Probably focus in more on the main subject so that it takes up more of the frame.
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FelixBetancort [2011-06-19 18:46:34 +0000 UTC]
I like your composicionn I like the color that is not so outrageous is not as opaque as a medium shade and looks good, I like your concerted approach. Actually doing very good picture: D
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imveryconfused [2011-06-05 06:57:16 +0000 UTC]
First off let me say that I thought this piece was lovely immediately after I saw the thumbnail! The colors are soft, and the focus is really nice, good DoF as well. I really like how the needles blur as they get further from the focal point at the end of the branch. I agree that this angle is more flattering than the other version, it gives more depth, and provides a focal point that isn't right in the middle which provides better composition.
Again I really think this is a beautiful piece! Great work!
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kpep [2011-06-03 03:53:53 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I really love the overall mood of this photograph. It makes me feel peaceful and happy. The details are beautiful and the placement is good. The blurring of the background really brings my focus into the center which is crisp and interesting. Honestly, I can't find anything to "critique" on as this is a gorgeous photo - great job!
On behalf of Exchange Gallery
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kpep In reply to luckydesigns [2011-06-03 18:38:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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RedFishing [2011-05-29 14:17:42 +0000 UTC]
That's one pretty pine tree XD I think I like this version better, it's not a professional reason but it's just because you can see more of the flowers and I like the angle > <
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Jacob-C-Wolf [2011-05-28 20:56:07 +0000 UTC]
This is a good fill the frame. With the background blurred it makes the mysteriously unknown, to me, plant stick out. It is a very solid piece all and all.
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avguztina [2011-05-28 19:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Excellent photo
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Idiosyzygic [2011-05-28 09:36:42 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, I really like this version a lot better than the first one. The angle of the shot really makes the object much more interesting to look at. The focus is done nicely so that the viewer can see the object's texture as well as its form and volume.
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joshonator12 [2011-04-23 11:47:58 +0000 UTC]
Very good macro photography, it makes me feel like I'm looking at the pine tree for the first time! I also have to agree that this is a better angle.
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midnitejinx [2011-04-22 01:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Both are lovely, but I prefer this angle better as well ^^
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