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lauren-bennett [2009-10-27 18:53:11 +0000 UTC]

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First I have to say that I really love the colors you used in this. Despite, I can see that there was some confusion in the intensity and placement of the light source... I can't tell if a dim main light source is coming from his front and an ambient light source is coming from where we're "standing" as viewers or otherwise. What I do is I actually draw arrows coming from my light sources in images to point at the figure, so I can get a better idea of where the light should be coming from.

Secondly, I'm not sure how I feel about the pointedness of his ear...it might be deliberate, if the fact that zombieness made his ear pointed like that or what, but I'm curious to hear e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> I mean, it's not bad, just if it wasn't supposed to be that way then I would look out for proper structure of the ear. It might seem trivial but I know that a lot of people are exactly like me and nitpick everything they see e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" />

Finally, the way his jaw is opening suggests that it's completely detached from his skull and has dropped. This is just an observation that may or may not be what you have desired in the outcome.

I hope this helps!! <3

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rohcca20 [2009-11-28 09:03:22 +0000 UTC]

this scares me..the blood is so realistic its creepy

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Seven--VII [2009-10-27 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty fucking awesome right thur * w*. I love your colouring, so dark <333

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draco-stargazer [2009-10-27 01:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Jeez and just when I thought Iden couldn't scare me anymore XD;

((Tis Megan by the way...It really sucks not seeing you at school anymore DX))

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MistressOrchid [2009-10-26 14:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that was a great movie ^^

This looks great Lucky! The colors and textures really go well! Nothing like a good zombie to get you into the Halloween spirit! XD

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WingsofaDemon [2009-10-26 04:04:25 +0000 UTC]

EEEEKKKKKKSSSSS!!!!!! *hides under a blanket* Still awesome, but also very frightening!

REMEMBER: Rule somthingnumberorother: BEWARE OF BATHROOMS!

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lauren-bennett [2009-10-26 04:01:39 +0000 UTC]

OLIVER STILL LOVES HIM EVEN THOUGH HE'S A ZOMBIE

I'll critique it later when I'm not tired out of my mind

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