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LuckyTaur3an27 — Struggle For Survival by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-05-07 05:40:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description My heart has stopped beating.
What should I do?
My lungs has stopped breathing,
and it's all 'cause of you.

You're the blood that my heart pumps
and you're the air that I breathe.
And now that you're gone,
my heart slowly decease...

A fragile glass heart,
shattered and broken.
So many things to say,
yet still are unspoken.

I'm choking to death,
and is struggling to survive.
I'm grasping for air,
hoping to revive.

It all happened too fast,
and ended too quickly.
And yet my heart's still drowning,
in the sea of pain and misery.
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Comments: 9

sarsor-feep [2008-05-16 19:38:07 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem.. great work!

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LuckyTaur3an27 In reply to sarsor-feep [2008-05-18 05:03:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

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EverFaithful [2008-05-08 04:58:25 +0000 UTC]

STOP IT WITH THE AMAZING POETRY!! T___T
*jealous*

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LuckyTaur3an27 In reply to EverFaithful [2008-05-09 01:00:04 +0000 UTC]

lol... trust me, my poetry isn't really that great compared to a friend of mine ...

If you really wanna read amazing poems, look up my friend Tom-Bone. He's an amazing poet, not to mention artist and writer... (His poem, "Universe Watching" is to die for!!!!)

And thanks by the way, I'm really happy you like it

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EverFaithful In reply to LuckyTaur3an27 [2008-05-09 02:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, ok. ^^

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yumi08uchiha [2008-05-07 12:05:22 +0000 UTC]

wow, I can really relate to this. I love it! I feel this way everyday. 'cause all I can do is watch him be with his next girlfriend, while I stand there thinking "that used to be me in her place" 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

LuckyTaur3an27 In reply to yumi08uchiha [2008-05-07 19:58:45 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly what you mean... I've been there... (not so fun if u ask me...) Anyway, I'm glad you like it... I tend to write poems that both the reader and I can relate to.... Thanks

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yumi08uchiha In reply to LuckyTaur3an27 [2008-05-07 22:31:15 +0000 UTC]

*nods*
you're welcome~

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LuckyTaur3an27 In reply to yumi08uchiha [2008-05-08 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]

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