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Firepaw, Ravenpaw (c) Erin Hunter

Firepaw- ginger tabby tom with green eyes
- underneath Ravenpaw
- Apprentice of Bluestar
- use to be a Kittypet

Ravenpaw- Black tom with a white tip tail, blue eyes
- laying ontop of Firepaw
- Apprentice to Tigerclaw
- Brother: Dustpelt
- Sisters: Frostfur, and Brindleface
- Parents: Robinwing and Fuzzypelt
- For a story i'll be doing but in it Ravenpaw is a female
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Bramblestar27 [2011-03-31 01:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww <3 Fireheart and Ravenpaw (she-cat) would've made such a cute couple!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-03-31 01:29:32 +0000 UTC]

i know, i just love it now

I'm going to do a story and these are the pairings

DustxSand
RavenxFire
GrayxSilver
SorrelxThorn
BrightxCloud
BrackenxFern
CinderxLittle

Thats what i got so far

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-03-31 04:49:49 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMGGGG! U HAVE NO IDEA HOW PERFECT THAT WOULD B!!!! OMGGGGG! ALL MY FAV COUPLES!!!!! 8D 8D 8D 8D AMAZINGNESS! U R THE MOST AWESOME PERSON EVER!!!!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-03-31 20:13:05 +0000 UTC]

What other pairings would their be?

And for the kits like

Spiderleg, Shrewpaw, Birchfall, Hollykit, Larchkit, Icecloud, Foxleap would they go to FernxBracken or SandxDust?

Squirrelflight, and Leafpool go to SandxDust or FirexRaven?

Poppyfrost, Honeyfern, Cinderheart, and Molepaw go to BrackenxFern or SorrelxThorn?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-03-31 20:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Here's what I was thinking:

SandxDust kits:
Spiderleg, Squirrelflight, Leafpool, Shrewpaw

SorrelxThorn kits:
Honeyfern, Poppyfrost, Cinderheart, Molepaw

FernxBracken kits:
Icecloud, Foxleap

You can pick where Larchkit, Hollykit, and Birchfall go to...IDK where they should

You can make up the FirexRaven kits!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-03-31 21:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I think Lrachkit, Hollykit, and Birchfall go with FernxBracken because Hollykit is pale gray.

Do you have any ideas for CinderxLittle kits, i might make Cinder not hurt her leg, and have Swiftpaw the Medicine cat Apprentice.

do you got some FirexRaven's kits ideas?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-01 02:21:37 +0000 UTC]

I think FernxBracken is a good idea, since Hollykit looks like Ferncloud, and Ferncloud's mother Brindleface i always imagined brown tabby, like the other two kits.

Ooooh I have an idea! Maybe Leafpool can be the daughter of Littlecloud and Cinderpelt, but she's raised in Sandstorm's litter because Cinder and Little want to keep their relationship a secret.

In my CinderxLittle fanfic I'm going to write, they have three kits: Blazekit (gingery-brown tabby tom with orange eyes) Featherkit (dark gray tabby she-cat with light blue eyes) and Leafkit (Leafpool). Blazekit and Featherkit die but...do the three names sound familiar? ANywho, u can use Blazekit and Leafkit(pool) as the CinderxLittle kits if you wish, but Featherkit will probably have to die at a young age so we don't get her mized up with Feathertail later on.

Hmmm, maybe for FirexRaven:

Mistkit--Black she-cat with green eyes and one white paw

Orangekit--Ginger tom with a white-tipped tail and a white dash on his chest

If u don't like those, i'mm totally open to suggestions

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-01 20:52:27 +0000 UTC]

i like that i also made some kits that have no names yet for RavenxFire (i was bored when i did it)

Kit 1- black with white back paws, muzzle and tip tail, light blue eyes

Kit 2- Ginger tabby with black stripes, light green eyes

Kit 3- dark ginger tabby with darker stripes, black striped tail, and legs, green-and-yellow eyes

kit 4- ginger tabby with darker stripes, white belly, and chest, dark green eyes

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-02 00:12:37 +0000 UTC]

I like those!

#1--Icekit-->Icefoot (male)

#2--Burnkit-->Burnstripe (male)

#3--Starlingkit-->Starlingflight (female)

#4--Flarekit-->Flarecloud (or other ending...i dont like that one much) (female)

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-02 00:16:58 +0000 UTC]

ok i'll also use yours, if thats ok. mine would be their second litter and yours be first litter.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-02 05:28:32 +0000 UTC]

That's all right, u don't have to usemine. After all, we don't want Ravenwing to be a slut

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-02 16:23:28 +0000 UTC]

But she'll only have Firestar's kits

Mistkit, Orangekit, Blazekit, and Featherkit what will their warrior names be?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-02 22:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Mistfern, Orangepelt, Blazeheart, and Featherkit...sadly, she has to die so she doesn't interfere with Feathertail If u like, u can have her live, but we'll have to change her name.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-02 22:56:47 +0000 UTC]

i guess she could die, be a little drama for Cinderpelt since she's breaking the Warrior Code.

Should Cinderpelt be a warrior or Medicine Cat? or should we have Swiftpaw be the Medicine cat?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-03 19:01:29 +0000 UTC]

IDK, either would be fine with me. Preferably, she should be med cat, since that would be how she met Littlecloud, but if she was a warrior, she could raise the kits...it's a difficult choice D: What do u think?

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-03 20:45:10 +0000 UTC]

i'm still going to have her get hit but if she becomes warrior then it heals correctly if not she'll end up like she was in the books. If she becomes warrior then Cinderpelt won't be the recarnation of Cinderheart

I think she should become Medicine Cat and Swiftpaw can still die i guess.

Have you read the Prologue yet?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-03 21:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, the prologue! I did read it 4got to comment, i'll do that rite away!

Up to u what happens to Cinderpelt :3 So u think after the dog attack Swiftpaw would be so beat up he had to become a medicine cat? Interesting idea...

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-03 21:29:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah, what if Cinderpelt become's the Medicine cat, and when Yellowfang died becuase of the smoke, she took Swiftpaw as an apprentice becuase a moon or so after Yellowfang's death he gets beat up by the pack of dogs.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-04 00:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, never thought about that! Btw, if Cinderpelt couldn't, who would raise Balzekit? I know Sand and Dust would raise Leafpool, but what about Blazeh? Also, I guess Leafpool would have to train as a warrior, since Swiftpaw would already be Cinderpelt's apprentice.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-04 17:30:53 +0000 UTC]

yup, Fire and Raven will take Blaze.

Well at least Leaf can now take care of Jay, Holly, and Lion without gettin in trouble.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-04 20:36:27 +0000 UTC]

All right, that works! If Cinderpelt is injured, that is. I take it she will be, tho. Oh ya! Leafpool will be warrior, so she can care for Jay, Holly, and Lion and everybody will be cool with it. Well, their dad will still be Crowy, but she can just say "i don't want to tell who the dad is" because the queens don't have to.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-05 01:10:19 +0000 UTC]

yup but what will Swiftpaw medincie cat name will be?

Swiftheart
Swiftwhisker
swiftcloud
Swiftwing
Swiftblaze
Swiftfoot
Swiftpelt
Swiftleg

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-05 01:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Swiftheart would be the best for a medicine cat If he was a warrior, I'd pick Swifttail, Swiftfoot, or Swiftleg.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-05 01:58:13 +0000 UTC]

ok Swiftheart it is

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-05 02:10:29 +0000 UTC]

YAY! That's an awesome name, although knowing Swiftpaw, he's not going to like bein a medicine cat too much

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-05 17:40:36 +0000 UTC]

yeah i know poor thing but Cinderpelt didn't want to be a medicine cat either.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-06 01:19:04 +0000 UTC]

ALL THESE CATS WHO DON'T WANT TO BE MEDICINE CATS! D: How sad However, Cinderpelt was pretty flexible about it, but Swiftpaw, being the stubborn guy he is...won't take it so easy :/

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-06 22:45:52 +0000 UTC]

yeah hmmm...how much can a dog damage a cat?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-06 23:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe his nose got clawed off so he lost his sense of smell...which u need to hunt and fight.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-07 23:00:10 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... maybe i'll use that if i can't find a more suitable injurey. i'll look online to see if anyone put pics of dog injurey on cats.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-08 04:15:12 +0000 UTC]

All righty, lemme kno if u find somethin!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-09 00:42:21 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-09 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he gets deaf in one ear......so he can't hear stuff enough 2 hunt and fight. Like, Swifty gets his ear ripped off

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-11 23:40:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah and he goes blind in one eye also.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-12 01:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Good idea! Well, that's sort of how brightheart is, but maybe no1 cared about Swiftpaw enough 2 train him as a warrior again, like with happened with CloudxBright.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-12 19:56:10 +0000 UTC]

i though Bright is only blind in one eye. yeah i mean he slightly took after long-y

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-14 00:40:07 +0000 UTC]

i think it mentioned Bright got her ear ripped up, but she can still ear out of it. Funny he and his mentor would both end up handicapped How convenient!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-14 01:14:56 +0000 UTC]

yeah they are just doom to be handicapped.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-15 02:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Poor them! D: So many handicapped cats in warriors...well then again these cats DO live in the wild.

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-15 20:27:29 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah lets see

Cinderpelt- leg mess up
Swiftpaw- blind in one eye and Deaf in one ear
Longtail- rabbit scratch result into blindness
Berrynose- tail went missing
Jayfeather- blind by birth
Spiderleg- has six toes on one paw
Brightheart- blind in one eye but missing half her ear

Anyone eles that's injury pretty bad or blind/deaf?

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-17 20:35:26 +0000 UTC]

O, and Snowkit was born deaf and deadfoot has a twisted paw. Brokenstar also has a bent tail...it think that's all?

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-17 22:47:11 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah, ummm... White-eye/one-eye has one blind eye later blind and deaf.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-18 01:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh ya! 4got her. i think she was just born that way, like it was a ene mess-up or somethin. None of these cats have genetic diseases...i guess cats don't have that

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-18 02:35:27 +0000 UTC]

i think they do it's just not prombitan in cats.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-18 03:15:29 +0000 UTC]

the only disease the cats every get is greencough...it really gets old, to tell the truth. the erins should introduce a new disease!

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-20 18:59:33 +0000 UTC]

well they also have whitecough but so true

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-22 02:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Whitecough is just a mild version of Greencough, so not rly. Shadowclan got the plague in OS, but after that the erins got too lazy to come up with new diseases. WE NEED SOME NEW PLOTLINES! They're getting too repetitive...

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-22 22:46:11 +0000 UTC]

yeah i'm going to bring in new diseases in my story like cancer, Lyme diseases (which cats catch from Deer ticks), cat flu, ect.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to lucymaggielover [2011-04-23 04:38:07 +0000 UTC]

ALL RIGHT! I totally can't wait It's about time more of the bad stuuf from the wild started kicking in. It'd b interesting 2 c how that stuff affects the cats...

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lucymaggielover In reply to Bramblestar27 [2011-04-23 21:12:04 +0000 UTC]

yeah i'll be like making up knew herbs for some and others they just die because they can't heal them

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