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Lulu-ichigo — Random Adventure Time Comic: Hunted, Page 1
Published: 2013-03-28 02:32:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 6762; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 0
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So yeah, this happened.I haven't finished writing the dialogue for the whole comic, but I've written and plotted out 4 pages worth of shit. I don't know how to draw comics properly -- and by that I mean I don't know anything about how many panels there should be in a page, you know, that kind of stuff. I just went on with it and made it randomly.
Oh, and also, this comic is gonna contain a lot of Marshall Lee, later on, because he's really rad. I ship Fiolee, so you can expect some little moments here and there, but not too much. Sweets are bad for your teeth.
(Idon'tknowwhatI'mdoingsendHELP)
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Pendelton Ward owns Adventure Time.
God bless Natasha Allegri for the Genderbent version.
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I'm glad to hear it!
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Is he supposed to be a human and the "Them" are the mutants?
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Nope. The old man isn't human. You'll find out soon what he really is when I post the other pages.
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oh, and i forgot to mention, but in these description parts where you're just randomly talking make sure to put which way you're supposed to read. i could easily figure it out since i'm an avid reader of both american comics and japanese manga, but for others it may not be so easily. people who usually read japanese manga will get confused very easily and then you'll have a lot of people asking you the same question over and over again til it bugs the crap out of you and you drop the comic completely. so, yeah, just wanted to add that.
good luck!
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uhm, okay, since i read manga all the time XD (japanse comic version)
usually, like in a book there are chapters, but the difference between regular books and comics is that the pages are usually between 18 and 30 pages (depending on how long the panels are) your panels are really midsized so if you were to continue this then per chapter would be around 21 pages of pure dialogue and drawing! ("WORK!" this seems to scream)
and your drawing is awesome! if you call this sketches then your drawing is really amazing 
but other than that you are good
and nice tree trunks
KEEP THE SHIPPIN GOIN GIRL!! (says the fiolee in me XD)
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Thanks for the tip, man! And yep, I've written out the whole plot in my head, and it seems I'm going to have to draw a lot of pages... *internally sobbing since I'm a lazymofo* I'll try harder though, so thanks for this comment. It really gives me a lot of motivation. Thanks once again!
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That's great! I love to draw, but i'm lazy also (don't go off my drawings in my gallery! Those are like the worst ones!)
So i understand completely
As long as you're having fun while drawin is all that matters
Plus, you are really awesome at drawing
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