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lumfini — Whats Up in color
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Published: 2017-06-30 22:49:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Yeah the color version! I vaguely had an idea of making it winter based while I was coming up with the sketch, but after coloring everything it kind of looks like a Christmas post card (in July? lol). Anyhow though, liked the way this piece came outInstagram!
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Greetings there! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Good Points:
- You're right! It does kind of look like a Christmas postcard! And it kind of makes the artwork more cute that way. (If only, there were some Christmas stuff lying around. XD)
- I like your use of purple in this artwork and how you use it to make the character pop more in the artwork. (I also like the purple lines on her. ^u^)
Improvements/Suggestions:
- The hand doing the peace sign kind of looks unnatural. The folded two fingers at the bottom are aligned with one another. But the bottom one is supposed to be smaller. (Believe me, I tried it out. XD)
- I wonder since the character meant to say "What's up?". Why not add a speech bubble of saying "What's up?" Words speak a lot too! (Literally.)
Hope this helps! ^_^
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Looking at the girl in the picture, I could say she looks very bold in the face of the cold. Even if the shorts she's wearing seems to leave her vulnerable, her demeanor suggests otherwise. The creases of her beanie (I think that's what this hat is called) go nicely with the posture and light facing her. However, the hot and her jacket look like a little too much shading got in, especially on the hat and the sleeve creases. Although the snow does well in reflecting the light onto her and her music player, the latter's upper corner looks a little too shaded as well. Her posture suggests a bold, yet modest look to her despite her slightly tired face. Besides the outer lining, it looks as though you've put much focus on color and hues sans line art, which turned out quite well. Her fingernails look particularly well polished, and the edge of her scarf looks nice wind blown out of the painting. Some untapped coloring to complement the lines, and hope to see more yet.
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Oh my God, what a beautiful pose!
She is very relaxed and beautiful, with good anatomy.
She also seems to be reasonably well seated.
The painting is also very good, I loved the colors.
What also caught my attention was the background, which is very beautiful, I love snow.
Some artists find it difficult to fit the poses with the backgrounds, since some become difficult to appear realistic.
Loved it!
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I like snow too but unfortunately where I live it doesn't snow (WHY MEEEE) and thank you !
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This piece looks absolutely gorgeous, though some of the anatomy could use a tiny bit of work. That shading is marvelous and the pose seems natural.
The top portion of the legs seem a bit too short and could make the drawing look awkward, and both segemtns of the arm seem just a bit too short, The only way I could reccommend fixing this drawing is by lengthening those body parts to a more natural length. The lighting and colour looks fantastic, and I wouldn't change anything related to that. The Background seems a bit bland and could use more detail, due to the character being so detailed and the background being a slate of gradient-ed brown with white dots for snow. Some of the lighting is a bit off from what I can only assume is the light source and some of the shading seems a bit too dark. Besides that the drawing looks magnificent, and I could only desire to have such great shading on my own art. The character has a unique design with a mostly natural look. The eyes have a beautiful colour and a lovely shape. and the few metal objects seems accurately shiny and realistic. All in all this looks great, well done.
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Beautifully drawn. Great expression!
Thank you for submitting to
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