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LunaOkamii — Don't cry

Published: 2013-03-06 20:00:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 577; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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Description Mission 8 prolouge part 2.

The young zorua stared at the vulpix until a flash of recognition appeared on her face. She struggled to get up and rubbed agianst Lullaby. In a soft voice the zorua whispered out "Mama, you came back for me."

Lullaby stood still, soaking in what the zorua said. Mama? Where? The zorua continued to bury itself into Lullaby and she felt her coat get wet. The child was crying. Lullaby started to panic. She needed to get the child to a doctor right away. She was injured. The zorua contiuned to mumble into Lullaby's chest, "Mama I thought you wouldn't come back. I waited really long."

Wait was the zorua calling her mama? "Um I-i'm not your mother..." Lullaby tried telling her but the zorua kept mumbling. "Please don't leave me alone agian Mama. I promise I'll be good."

Lullaby frowned. What was this kid talking about? Was she alone now? Lullaby struggled with an inner battle of whether to take the zorua along with her or not but finally sighed and tucked the child into her coat. "Don't cry. I won't leave you alone anymore."

Yaaaayyy part 2!!! I couldn't have anyone check this though because is not on DX DX So please tell me if there are any mistakes! ;A; im not very good at writing...... Also im trying different art because the previous one took forever to do dX

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Comments: 16

Rennaitale [2013-03-19 21:31:55 +0000 UTC]

how can you ever expect me to cry with this adorableness loating itself over my screen?
Just adopt that baby, you are trapped once it uses its puppy eyes.

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LunaOkamii In reply to Rennaitale [2013-03-20 00:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Muhahaha >: D that was my plan!
and noone can resist adorable puppy dog eyes. noone

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azurarazor [2013-03-07 02:25:50 +0000 UTC]

AWAWWWWHHHH
Lullaby's a mommy!! It's so cute!

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LunaOkamii In reply to azurarazor [2013-03-07 03:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Yup >W<

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MixedMelodies [2013-03-06 23:39:11 +0000 UTC]

pfoskd I'm surprised I was mentioned. XD Although when you posted this I was in school at class. .u.

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LunaOkamii In reply to MixedMelodies [2013-03-07 01:08:10 +0000 UTC]

thats alrght classes come first. and yup, i had to mention how there was noone to tell me if i made a bunch of mistakes DX

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shiver59 [2013-03-06 22:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Fluffin adorable

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LunaOkamii In reply to shiver59 [2013-03-07 01:08:20 +0000 UTC]

>W< thanks Shiver~~

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shiver59 In reply to LunaOkamii [2013-03-07 05:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome Luna

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Perfume-of-Faith [2013-03-06 22:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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LunaOkamii In reply to Perfume-of-Faith [2013-03-07 01:08:28 +0000 UTC]

?? :0

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SadUnicorn [2013-03-06 20:40:01 +0000 UTC]

awwwww

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LunaOkamii In reply to SadUnicorn [2013-03-07 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]

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SadUnicorn In reply to LunaOkamii [2013-03-08 21:32:39 +0000 UTC]

dat spasm!

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Pannzilla [2013-03-06 20:06:46 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute and pretty and aghhdgfs ;o;
There's a typo in first lines though, i believe ouo "Mama, you came back for me." is what i believe you meant.

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LunaOkamii In reply to Pannzilla [2013-03-06 20:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you >//<
and woopsies XD aha thank you for pointing it out to me >x<

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Pannzilla In reply to LunaOkamii [2013-03-06 20:09:48 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome ouo
And no problem! Typos happen to all of us, ahah <':

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