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Well Mazzy does get a kickback from the glassmaker.
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So that's why Taurus doesn't fit windows as seen on pages 78 and 107! It's all so clear now. 
But that there's a pretty interesting scenario under development. Perhaps Luna could learn a bit more about... the one who shall not be named.
So, only two things stuck out to me. First in the first frame, use of the word "instructed" by Luna seems to imply a level of authority which she clearly doesn't possess so it sounds a bit odd. What are your thoughts about using the word "requested"?
The second thing that caught my eye was "griffons" in the 3rd panel. I was curious about the spelling, so I did a quick search and was actually quite shocked: www.google.com/search?q=griffo… But, looking up "griffins", I see that griffin, griffon, or gryphon are all indeed applicable spellings for it, and "griffons" is consistent with your first usage way early on, so I wouldn't change it. But thought I'd inform you all the same of something that certain dog enthusiasts might notice. ^^
Ooo, can't wait to see how things go! 
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A little late with responding, but yuuus thanks! I just updated that first panel! I agree, that fits much better
I remember a few years ago I actually made a journal to ask people about the word griffin/griffon/gryphon because it really confused me but like you've read, was told it didn't actually matter. ^^ (those adorable dogs though!! I did not know about those cuties haha X'D ) funnily enough, I actually nowadays spell it 'griffin' but have just been keeping it consistent like you mention. I was recently rereading some of the first pages of the comic though and was cringing at a lot of little things so I plan to actually make some updates to the earlier pages and might think about changing it all to griffin, it wouldn't be hard to do. 
Lol, nice spotting for the pages where Taurus says he doesn't fit windows haha. XD The mystery behind Mazzy just miiight discovered very soon heheehee!! 
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No probs!
(Right? I didn't have a clue myself! ^^)
All, well, that's entirely up to you. I guess since you have the source scripts and therefore know what pages reference it, it would be easy enough to do a Ctrl+F to find them. 
Yes, they definitely are, but they really do add the needed atmosphere.
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Intriguing, poor Luna, looks like she'll never get out of this loop.
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Welp, this timeline is a bust. Work on some sidequests, Luna.
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Lol sidequests should be fun for her
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lol, yup she's the annoying one
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Her medical knowledge were gain at the prize of her social skills.
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