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LunarisFuryAileron — RWBY OC - Silva 'Giniro' Argenn

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Name: Silva ‘Giniro’ Argenn the wolf faunus

 

Silva had a dark past. His mother died shortly after giving birth to him which he had always blamed himself since then. At the age of 5, his father committed suicide, leaving behind a note saying how much he missed his wife and how hard and unwilling he is to take care of Silva. Afterward he was taken care by a poorly maintained orphanage for faunus orphan at the edge of the city. He and along a dozen of faunus orphans were taken care of by a pair of loving sisters whom Silva admired so much. It was a harsh life, but Silva was happy to be with people he can call family. However, at the age of 8, a group of grimms attacked the orphanage and the rest of the township. Being at the edge of the city, help came very late. The grimms killed everyone in their sleep. Silva managed to slip away and hide. However, in his sorrow, despair, and rage, he awakened his power, the ‘Life Tap’. He tapped into his life force and temporarily gains super strength, super speed, super recovery, and super sense. Using a simple sword he found, he butchered all of the wild grimms. His Life Tap also allows him to reinforce the sword and make it stronger. His eyes turned red when he activates his power. When help arrived, they saw only him and corpses of other people, faunus, and grimm.

Local faunus extremist group heard the rumours about Silva and kidnapped him. He is then trained by the group to be their elite soldier. Silva, now desperate for family and home, followed the group’s orders. The group took advantage of his natural talent and killer instinct for their agenda. Silva is trained to be an assassin and continued to serve the group. He performed assassinations of various political leaders and powerful people, and usually not shy to mass murder the whole guards and innocent people alongside them in accordance to the group’s order. During his time as child assassin, he discovered his secondary power, ‘Corruption’ and ‘Soul Assumption’. Corruption allows him to sever the life force of living things surrounding him while Soul Assumption allows him to absorb the life force, essentially an energy vampirism that also counters the disadvantages of using Life Tap.

After years doing the group’s dirty works, Silva learned more about the world and discovered how wrong and despicable his current ‘family’ is. At the age of 14, during the meeting of the top brass, Silva became annoyed by all the plans the group had for him and slaughter everyone there. He burnt down the main headquarters and runs away as fugitive. Silva then tries to redeem himself. He fought grimms and protect people in various places while running away from various people who try to catch him. He gained reputation as the protector of the weak, the Silver Guardian. At the age of 16, he was confronted by Ozpin who has also been pursuing him. Ozpin gave him an offer, to serve him to better protect the innocents, in return, Ozpin will give him home and protection. Silva who is now tired of running accepted the offer and pledge loyalty, being familiar with Ozpin’s reputation. He is to be enrolled to Beacon Academy by Ozpin’s personal recommendation, similar to Ruby.

In Beacon, due to his experience, strength, and natural ability, he was given a special status. He is not put in a team but instead became a ‘freelancer’ student. He will join any team that needed an extra hand on any mission and because of his flexibility, he can take up any role in a team although he prefers to be the frontliner. He enjoyed studying in Beacon. He wanted to make as many friends as possible while at the same time continue protecting the innocents from grimm and evil people. His friendliness, ambition, and strength become a topic of admirations of the students there, including team RWBY and JNPR.

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This whole shit is a satire. Go google Mary Sue.

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Comments: 62

drewsb [2016-01-18 03:43:50 +0000 UTC]

For a sec there, I thought one of us ripped of the other, since both our OC's have the same name. Glad to see though that they are very different. While I do agree that your Silva is a bit of an OC (Not the Saitama kind), he is still pretty interesting. I wish for you to comment on my OC. I'm afraid I am no artist, so I can only write out my OC's bio.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to drewsb [2016-01-18 09:46:20 +0000 UTC]

No, my Silva is a shit character.

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drewsb In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2016-01-18 13:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say completely. His semblance is interesting, but he needs limits. Ruby can't turn well or go the same speed with heavy objects, and Yang's defense doesn't increase with her strength. My Silva's semblance is called sensory field. He uses his aura to send out an invisible pulse that spreads outward indefinitley, giving all physical and structural details of any organism or object in the vicinity (including aura level). However, it's just one pulse at a time. To keep tabs on an enemies position, he needs to concentrate on sending pulses in a steady stream. This forms a complete dome in which he knows all. However, it requires complete concentration to maintain and has a current limit of a 50 foot radius. While they all are powerful, they all have limits. Think like the devil fruits from one piece. While they are powerful, their strength depends on the wielder and they all take away the ability to swim. You have the foundations, now you just need to build your tower.

But I did find his back story a little generic.

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Co-Swagster [2014-11-19 16:38:50 +0000 UTC]

If you thought that was bad, I decided to make a joke RWBY OC even more powerful. Of course, this Deviation helped contribute to the creation of this abomination. Thank you.

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Hfar [2014-08-07 23:18:48 +0000 UTC]

You forgot to add a part where he's secretly half grimm as part of a super secrety special dark awesome research project and he's the first and only one of his kind.  Also, he needs a weapon that he designed himself.  That has an AI.  And can transform into a robot.

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Co-Swagster In reply to Hfar [2014-11-19 16:39:10 +0000 UTC]

You forgot the part where he turns into...  THE MOST ULTIMATE RWBY OC OF ALL TIME + EXISTENCE

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Cole-Flames [2014-08-03 05:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Interesting original character idea, Lunaris. Although, I'd enjoy seeing you write your own story.

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kimarous [2014-08-02 07:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Enjoyably silly read.

Sorta made me realize that my own RWBY OCs, Team JNGL, don't even have Semblances. It's something that I've avoided due to knowing too little about them beyond "they exist" and "Pyrrha and Ruby have theirs specified". I always prioritized the character/team motifs and weapons before anything else. Appearance is pretty much the last thing I've thought about, minus the fact that each member of Team JNGL 1) are faunus, and 2) have severed body parts (ranging from "missing fingers" to "complete loss of appendage").

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mouse1002 [2014-08-01 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]

nice have a favew.

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Silverknight22 [2014-07-31 23:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Why zipper pants, why not just wear shorts?

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to Silverknight22 [2014-08-01 00:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Why not both.

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Silverknight22 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-08-01 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Touche. 

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DeadlyCookie98 [2014-07-31 20:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Geez you made my eyes tear up with the
concentrated Sue energy in the descrition.
How long did you study the Sues to make
up such a character?
His design isn't bad though.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to DeadlyCookie98 [2014-08-01 00:51:54 +0000 UTC]

It didn't take long because writing a Sue is such a lazy and easy job.

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DeadlyCookie98 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-08-01 13:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Makes sense. This is the first time I saw a Sue being created
with the goal to create a Sue though.

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Co-Swagster [2014-07-31 19:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Having gone over this Mary Sue Joke OC for the second time in detail, I burst into tears laughing for the first time in many months. Thank you, Luna.

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Awesome-nee [2014-07-31 19:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I dont get the major influx of OC's either. Its getting annoying, and I like reading one every now and then but this si just getting out of hand. 
Like his design ._.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to Awesome-nee [2014-08-01 00:48:43 +0000 UTC]

It got out of hand many many months ago.

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NaijMizuho [2014-07-31 16:11:11 +0000 UTC]

I so skimmed this bio, and with just how much I read, I broke down in tears laughing.
 
For your indulgence, I only read:

"Silva had a dark past. His mother died shortly after giving bir..."

"....became a 'freelancer' student..."

"This whole shit is a satire. Go google Mary Sue."

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to NaijMizuho [2014-07-31 16:21:44 +0000 UTC]

If you read more in detail, you'll laugh more.

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NaijMizuho In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 16:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Good God that was a riot. xD

Please tell me "a topic of admirations of the students there, including team RWBY and JNPR" is a jab at a certain Gary Sue... :3

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to NaijMizuho [2014-07-31 16:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Eh, maybe. Who knows.

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NaijMizuho In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 16:37:55 +0000 UTC]

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NaijMizuho In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 16:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Will do. xD

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Glant5876 [2014-07-31 11:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Have I ever expressed just how fantastic you are?
Because you're fantastic on about 200 different levels.
I would say this is worth it's weight in gold, but attempting to quantify the weight of data doesn't sound very fun, so I'll just say 300 points to you. I love it when people subtly poke fun at Mary/Gary Sue/Stu's, it's delightful.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to Glant5876 [2014-07-31 13:16:23 +0000 UTC]

It's not that subtle though, People know I wouldn't write something like this.

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Glant5876 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 13:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough, omitting the "subtle" doesn't change anything though, people poking fun at Mary Sues is fabulous.

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AnthonyPap07 [2014-07-31 10:05:51 +0000 UTC]

I did want to see Blake dealing with the fact that her old family are now her enemies ,Jaune struggling with his team since he lied his way to Beacon causing Ren and Nora to stop taking him seriously, Pyrrha's obvious Arc -hehe,it will never get old- and most of all Ruby growing up while trying to retain her innocence in this dark world...Oh and some actual hetero pairings.But no this guy is now my new favorite and has convinced me that RWBY and JNPR are just there for background.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to AnthonyPap07 [2014-07-31 10:28:02 +0000 UTC]

I know, right? I'm a genius writer and Burnie should hire me.

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RyuFrei [2014-07-31 09:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh My Well that was an Interesting read...

Well I should say Some of the OCs are OP but if you can balance their weapon and Semblance uvu it should be fine

But still GHHH I know what you mean by this so GHHHHH

.3. so fixing my OC's Weapon

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hamboneYEAH [2014-07-31 08:51:44 +0000 UTC]

I was honestly worried until I read the very last line. It's not incredibly difficult to just make a weapon, make a simple semblance, then, if truly necessary, make an original set of circumstances. 

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catnip513 [2014-07-31 06:57:32 +0000 UTC]

....   -sweat-

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nmr808 [2014-07-31 06:54:45 +0000 UTC]

People should just make anti-sues nowadays. Xp

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wolffang719 [2014-07-31 06:07:48 +0000 UTC]

(Because I pressed the wrong button this is a continuation of my first comment) But OC's; OC's tend to be ridiculously OP, Silva is relatively tame compared to some things I've seen: An OC who was half dragon and hunted by the white-fang, a man who splits into four people to be his own team, and I wish I was making this on up: a clone made from Yang and Blake and a beowolfs DNA who was made, used, and escaped the white-fang who got adopted by Ozpin and enrolled into beacon and made the fifth member of team RWBY because Yang and Blake were basically her parents and long story short she kills Cinder in the end...

And yet; its so hard NOT to make a RWBY OC a sue: in a world where everyone has powers and weapons that change into other weapons its hard to restrict one self to the thin boundaries set within the universe, and I know how hard it its; I try everything to make my characters non-sue: old weapons, mental instability, trust issues, one of them has a hopeless crush on Yang, during initiation they needed to be bailed out by another team... but its still hard to imagine they would be threatened in a fight with any adversary...

So I both understand, and can't stand sues. Its a double edged sword and I'm being smacked with the blunt.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to wolffang719 [2014-07-31 06:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Response to first paragraph;

...

Eww.

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wolffang719 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 17:07:04 +0000 UTC]

I still have nightmares...

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ArmamentDawg [2014-07-31 05:37:50 +0000 UTC]

The character's biography is shit, but at least the design is well done.

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wolffang719 [2014-07-31 04:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Honestly in RWBY I don't think it's scientifically possible to NOT be a sue, as much as I love RWBY every character has the 'perfect imperfections' that can lead to a sue; Jaune faked his papers to live up to his legacy and needs help, Weiss grew up rich but sad and wants something more, and Ruby "Has silver eyes" which; lets face it; means at some point somewhere DHIT BE GOIN DOWN.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to wolffang719 [2014-07-31 04:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, they're not fanmade OCs, so there's that. And the scenario you described hardly describe the more hardcore annoying kind of Sue I saw.

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wolffang719 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 04:59:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I hit the wrong button before I could finish though...
I was gonna rant on why some (most) OCs In RWBY are ludicrous.

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Co-Swagster [2014-07-31 04:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Having made an legitimate RWBY OC and then viewing some of the other RWBY OC's, you've basically explained the entire OC Fandom in 4 beautiful paragraphs.

This is gold.

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darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 [2014-07-31 04:31:14 +0000 UTC]

well there is mary sue. But is there anything wrong with giving your oc's SOME strength in a fight to kill?

there is a mary sue, then there is a character who can't fight a toddler in a death match :/


Though I do agree with this a lot

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 [2014-07-31 04:39:59 +0000 UTC]

The keyword there is 'some strength'.

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darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 04:47:21 +0000 UTC]

the 'some strength' in rwby is being to soar through the god damn air slicing through monsters like there is no tomorrow

shooting shotgun bullets from gaulents without taking your hand off

use a machine gun whip perfectly without missing

and able to take a punch from magical giant armors and still kill it by going right through it


I don't promote rwby oc's being able to destroy everything like it's nothing but...yeah rwby is meant for complete destruction in it's characters weapons

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 [2014-07-31 04:53:03 +0000 UTC]

And I made those people who did what you described admire my OC for being strong.

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darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 05:03:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry but I actually don't understand what you mean in that comment.

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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 [2014-07-31 05:09:03 +0000 UTC]

You described impressive feats by the characters in RWBY and so I write that my OC is way stronger than them that the characters who performed all those impressive feats are impressed by my OC's strength. My OC here is stupidly overpowered that it's practically bad writing.

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darklordAWESOMEDUDE2 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2014-07-31 05:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see what you mean now.

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VoidManiac [2014-07-31 04:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Gr8 stuff as always!

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AikiYun [2014-07-31 03:57:06 +0000 UTC]

This whole shit is a satire. Go google Mary Sue.

So I take it you are poking fun at the RWBY OC fanon.

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