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LunaRota — Faeries

Published: 2004-11-12 02:17:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 27
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Description These are the things you do not see,
That thrive within the gnarly oak tree.
Faeries they be.
Ever dancing
Nearly prancing
As they cross from bough to bough
You wonder how
They fling and fly
But there is no need to ask why.

They are mysterious and they work their own way
As the sun falls and looses each ray.
You never see them
They're hardly there
As always nimble and fair.
Their wings spread and they fly away,
And here begins another day.
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Comments: 8

Lain-Iwakura [2004-12-20 18:10:36 +0000 UTC]

How cute! The rhyming helps paint the stoy-book beauty that firies represnt i love it! fav for you!

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LunaRota In reply to Lain-Iwakura [2004-12-20 21:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you! Fairies are a good thing. And so are story books.

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Lain-Iwakura In reply to LunaRota [2004-12-21 04:42:52 +0000 UTC]

^^ Aye.

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elfiejane [2004-11-12 23:44:19 +0000 UTC]

i like this one

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LunaRota In reply to elfiejane [2004-11-13 00:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I appreciate your comment, and am glad you like it.

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ShadowchildofChaos [2004-11-12 16:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Its pretty.... I like Faeries too.... The poem has a nice theme...

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LunaRota In reply to ShadowchildofChaos [2004-11-13 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]

You are the first one to comment on many of my poems! It is nice to know someone takes the time to read them AND leave a quick comment. Feedback is great. Thanks a lot once again.

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ShadowchildofChaos In reply to LunaRota [2004-11-14 05:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome... lol.... I leve comments because everyone shoud be proud of their work.... because it is beautiful....

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