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Lux-896 β€” Let her be
Published: 2011-03-29 23:08:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description Hold your words in.Β Β Let it go onto your breath.
Dare to look beyond and you'll find something more
than the girl who gives a damn about her hair.
Hold your thoughts; don't try to understand
where her eyes are missing. Deep and high above the earth.

You'll never know where she has been,
or where that wide smile comes from.
You'll never know, you'll never know.
that comes from the same place
her scars begun to bleed
and her spirit started to soar.

Hold your index finger, keep it into your pockets
as she paints her sky in green,
as she runs barefoot, as she dares to scream.
as she falls for the rain
as she dares to hope
for a new dream.

Hold your words
Hold your thoughts
Hold your hands
Hold her tight...
Very tight...
hold me...
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Comments: 17

MMDanielson [2011-07-07 18:08:50 +0000 UTC]

A great poem for any guy who's trying to understand a woman. It was an experience, not just a read.

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Lux-896 In reply to MMDanielson [2011-07-08 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Woww.... i'm more that thrilled... you just gave my poem a fav!
Don't ever try to understand a woman's mind just love her the way she is.
Thanks for reading it.
Un abrazo desde Costa Rica.

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MMDanielson In reply to Lux-896 [2011-07-08 16:13:33 +0000 UTC]

I like your work. I wish I knew Spanish so I could read more. Your English is excellent.
I've learned that over time. You have to know her, not understand her.

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Kumicoo [2011-07-02 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]

muy lindo.. me gusto espero puedas leer algo de lo mΓ­o n.n espero criticas n_n [link]

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Xerolien [2011-04-12 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

With a slightly more composed composition of repetition this could be one hell of an Indie-rock song in no time!

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Lux-896 In reply to Xerolien [2011-04-15 01:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Wowww thanks for such a great compliment.
I don't know how to write music

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Xerolien In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-18 20:58:59 +0000 UTC]

That doesn't matter
It's just that as I do, I can't help to notice it
It's great as it is

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RelayerDuos [2011-04-01 09:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Not quite so sure about the 3rd and 4th stanzas.... The first two showed good metric control, though.

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Lux-896 In reply to RelayerDuos [2011-04-02 17:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment.
So I started it well and then lost the idea?

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RelayerDuos In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-02 22:56:34 +0000 UTC]

I think so. Lost your focus!

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Y-O-D-H [2011-03-30 10:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Quite passionate. Interesting word play, unique imagery. I look forward to seeing more from you.

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Lux-896 In reply to Y-O-D-H [2011-03-30 21:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I feel honored.
I'm not so good writing in english, sometimes it's kind of difficult because spanish is my native language, even though, I feel like if I could express myself better.

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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-03-30 23:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Seeing how well you write in English makes me wish I could read Spanish.

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Lux-896 In reply to Y-O-D-H [2011-03-30 23:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Once I was chatting with an american guy who told me it was easier to learn English than to learn Spanish. I'm not so sure about that 'cause i'm so out of practice and I'm terrible when it comes to grammar T_T

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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-01 03:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Everyone I've heard from agrees English is the most difficult language to learn, with the possible exception of Chinese.

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Lux-896 In reply to Y-O-D-H [2011-04-02 17:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... they say chinese is the most freaking difficult language to learn, I've heard german is also kind of hard to speak too.

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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-02 23:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Maybe difficult to pronounce, but relatively easy to learn. I studied German when I was younger, but I don't remember much.

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