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MMDanielson [2011-07-07 18:08:50 +0000 UTC]
A great poem for any guy who's trying to understand a woman. It was an experience, not just a read.
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MMDanielson In reply to Lux-896 [2011-07-08 16:13:33 +0000 UTC]
I like your work. I wish I knew Spanish so I could read more. Your English is excellent.
I've learned that over time. You have to know her, not understand her.
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RelayerDuos [2011-04-01 09:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Not quite so sure about the 3rd and 4th stanzas.... The first two showed good metric control, though.
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RelayerDuos In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-02 22:56:34 +0000 UTC]
I think so. Lost your focus!
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Y-O-D-H [2011-03-30 10:59:44 +0000 UTC]
Quite passionate. Interesting word play, unique imagery. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-03-30 23:08:06 +0000 UTC]
Seeing how well you write in English makes me wish I could read Spanish.
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Lux-896 In reply to Y-O-D-H [2011-03-30 23:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Once I was chatting with an american guy who told me it was easier to learn English than to learn Spanish. I'm not so sure about that 'cause i'm so out of practice and I'm terrible when it comes to grammar T_T
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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-01 03:48:04 +0000 UTC]
Everyone I've heard from agrees English is the most difficult language to learn, with the possible exception of Chinese.
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Lux-896 In reply to Y-O-D-H [2011-04-02 17:44:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... they say chinese is the most freaking difficult language to learn, I've heard german is also kind of hard to speak too.
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Y-O-D-H In reply to Lux-896 [2011-04-02 23:57:07 +0000 UTC]
Maybe difficult to pronounce, but relatively easy to learn. I studied German when I was younger, but I don't remember much.
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