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Published: 2017-07-28 01:55:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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StylishGamerFnafFim wanted me to draw something like thisim kinda proud of it,,,
ill post a speedpaint later
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Hi! So sorry for bugging you, but this piece looks really cool! Your art style is really cute, the lineart is nice and crisp, and I really love the colors that you used for this piece (and all of the pieces you made). However, there is just a couple that you could probably fix, and you don't have to take this if you don't want to, I'm just saying my opinion.
1: While I do like your shading technique and use different shades of the shadow color (same with the highlight colors), personally I think that the shading seems a little too blocky. Don't get me wrong, I find cell shading to be very cool, but I feel like the colors should blend into each other just a bit. What you could probably do is on one layer on the art program you use (if there's an option, set it on 'multiply', if not then the hue and saturation option), then slightly blend out the edges of the layer. You could then set the opacity to what ever suits you best, then on another layer do the same as the previous layer, but not blend out the edges of that layer. For the highlights, this one will depend on what fits you best.
2: Like I said, I really love the colors you used for this piece (I know this is something a user asked you to and might be the actual palette, but feel free to correct me on this part), but I feel like areas where there are highlights (like the ones on the scarf) make the highlighted area really bright and hurts the eyes a bit. What you could probably do ise.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
*Tone down the opacity of the highlight to at least 50%, that way if you have a bright color, the area where its highlighted won't hurt the eye.
*Maybe you could slightly choose a slightly lighter color for the base color.
Like I said, you don't have to take this.
I hope this helps, and I hope you have a wonderful day/evening e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
(your art style is really cute, keep up the good work!)
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aaa thank you so much for the critique !!!!!
this helps a lot thank you <3
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Late reply whoops
No problem!
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