Comments: 19
vladnorris [2014-01-07 20:29:14 +0000 UTC]
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Okay...this one is actually quite a cool scene.
The effects are properly made, so are the sound effect at the end.
The shading is nice too, as you actually made a goo use of the properties of the pencil and add all the details of both designs.
If I actually had do point out something you had to work on, is the proportions. It's not by a terrible margin, but some segments of the drafts feel off, like Link's shield in the last panel for example. Plus, while the shading looks nice, when making dynamic scenes it's important to make the shading, well..."dynamic" too. If you check manga battle scenes like the ones in Dragon Ball, you'll see the shading at times becomes part of the dynamic lines as well. But oh well, that's at least my take on it. Nice work, pal.
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vladnorris In reply to LycanthropeHeart [2014-01-09 02:04:36 +0000 UTC]
No problem, and always keep drawing.
I would, however, appreciate some feedback myself XD
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Dimension-Dino [2012-10-27 15:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Best idea for this pic: find someone who'd be willing to color it.
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LycanthropeHeart In reply to Dimension-Dino [2012-10-28 20:01:08 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking on coloring it myself... but yeah! I think it would be more interesting if someone else do it!
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Lyn-sanii [2012-10-10 02:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! : O
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Lyn-sanii [2012-10-10 02:53:54 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! : O
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BLaKcatINK [2012-10-09 21:12:42 +0000 UTC]
Great Work!! Nice use of swoosh lines and great job on the movement of the characters!!
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Abrahamian [2012-08-26 06:38:57 +0000 UTC]
Never seen a smash bros comic so intense!
Great stuff!!
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aniwablue [2012-08-15 13:28:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, so epic! Really well done! And viva traditional art!
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Fireshrike [2012-08-14 15:51:36 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! Very dramatic!
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MrNintMan [2012-08-10 23:51:21 +0000 UTC]
LOOKS EPIC & AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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