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Published: 2009-01-10 17:10:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2316; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 34
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Description This is my entry for contest. ^^

Name: Maki
Age: 15
Birthday: June 18th
Height: 157cm
Weight: 51kg
Rank: Genin
Village: Hidden Leaf Village
Country: Fire
Personality: Little shy but still wild, emotional, intelligent, and usually she's really happy

Story:
Maki borned on one little island named Baru baru. It was poor and little primitive. But she was living happy life in there. Maki had mom and dad and she was the only child. She was lonely 'cause other kids consider that Maki was weird 'cause often she talks to animals.
But one day few ship camed and destroyed everything 'cause the little island was due for them but they were poor and didn't have money. Luckily they had few little boats and childrens and womans had to get away and leave they're mens to fight. But Maki ended up in a boat without her mom.
Two days later Maki waked up on a beach and she was alone. Then she finded Konoha and then she got to the Ninja school. But Maki didn't show her sadness to anyone and expressed to be always happy.
This happened when she was 5-years old.

Ninjutsu - 4/5
Taijutsu - 3/5
Genjutsu - 0/5

Fighting style: Maki uses her boomerang mostly on the fights and she is pretty fast and great jumper(I hope that was right..)

Taijutsu: None I guess but she uses her boomerang and same kind of taijutsus like Lee.

Ninjutsu:
- Bunshin no jutsu
- Henge no jutsu
- Kawarimi
- Kugutsu no jutsu(instead the puppets she uses this on her boomerang)
- Shosen jutsu(not as good like Sakura)

Genjutsu: None


Hobbies: Maki likes to be on nature and usually she jumps on the trees like Kiba. And she likes to be with animals most of the time. When she's bored, she polish her boomerang.

Likes: Animals, stars, beach, cocos milk, fruits, funny and nice people
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Comments: 59

lyneri In reply to ??? [2011-03-21 10:08:16 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks!

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Kazumi-Senpai [2010-09-27 05:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Awesome oc!

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lyneri In reply to Kazumi-Senpai [2010-09-27 06:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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RakuAyame [2010-04-17 20:21:44 +0000 UTC]

her hairstyle is so kawaii

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lyneri In reply to RakuAyame [2010-04-18 11:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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RakuAyame In reply to lyneri [2010-04-18 12:35:49 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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omegar112 [2009-05-08 00:11:39 +0000 UTC]

the story of what happened to her island is kinda similar to the story of my naruto village, and she fits the peoples physical description too (i wanted more dark skinned ninjas). kool boomerang ninja btw.

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lyneri In reply to omegar112 [2009-05-08 11:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh it is? Cool. I think I want dark skinned ninjas too and I have lots of them in my head... But thanks a lot!

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omegar112 In reply to lyneri [2009-05-08 19:59:12 +0000 UTC]

i think new weapons is the one thing the original naruto is really lacking in

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dexvaldex [2009-01-31 14:15:43 +0000 UTC]

WOOWWWWW!!!
^///^
nice work!!

and congrats 4 win the contest!! and welcome to the Neji-sensei team ^^

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lyneri In reply to dexvaldex [2009-01-31 17:58:17 +0000 UTC]

Heh thanks so much!

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dexvaldex In reply to lyneri [2009-02-05 23:08:18 +0000 UTC]

ejjej you are welcome

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shirleygeeart [2009-01-24 20:23:43 +0000 UTC]

I like her! o.o very nice design! :3

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lyneri In reply to shirleygeeart [2009-01-24 20:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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bungtiddletiddlebing [2009-01-23 21:37:49 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!!!! give her another boomerang- a metal one that could cut through stuff- that and if you giver her the wind element...it could cut through rocks and stuff- frickn' sweet...............hummmmmmm........maybe when she's chuunin or somfin...

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lyneri In reply to bungtiddletiddlebing [2009-01-24 10:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Heh yeah.. Thanks a lot!

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tidus-and-yuna [2009-01-23 11:49:03 +0000 UTC]

...Congratulations on winning the contest! Now Maki is in Neji's team! She will not be alone anymore See ya!

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lyneri In reply to tidus-and-yuna [2009-01-23 11:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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Kasamizuki [2009-01-21 04:11:07 +0000 UTC]

I already commented, but I'm commenting again to say congratulations! <3

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lyneri In reply to Kasamizuki [2009-01-21 12:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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lonesomeblade [2009-01-21 00:07:49 +0000 UTC]

sweeet entry !! congratulations, very cool

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lyneri In reply to lonesomeblade [2009-01-21 13:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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Naome-Punk [2009-01-20 23:55:42 +0000 UTC]

congratz!!! ^^ great job!

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lyneri In reply to Naome-Punk [2009-01-21 13:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! : )

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sparkjolt [2009-01-20 16:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on winning! You deserve it. She's got the same birthday as me! XD

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lyneri In reply to sparkjolt [2009-01-20 16:46:49 +0000 UTC]

Heh thanks!

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Zeraphalanx [2009-01-20 04:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on winning, Suzura.

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lyneri In reply to Zeraphalanx [2009-01-20 13:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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Zeraphalanx In reply to lyneri [2009-01-20 19:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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Claamchowder [2009-01-20 04:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Lawl whoops, reread the journal entry, saw that only one could win, and giggled. Made a mistake there. Still, CONGRATS, YOU LUCKY PERSON YOU!

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lyneri In reply to Claamchowder [2009-01-20 13:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Better luck next time : ) But thanks a lot!

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Claamchowder [2009-01-20 04:08:09 +0000 UTC]

WHOOT! CONGRATS ON WINNING! 8D
Hope our characters will be teammates.. doubt that my Tomeo will get in, though.

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MaruChiku [2009-01-14 08:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Such a fun character with a great, vivid design.
Very unique and fresh. I love the weapon and expressions.
Hope you win~ <33.

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lyneri In reply to MaruChiku [2009-01-14 13:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Heh thanks a lot!

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MaruChiku In reply to lyneri [2009-01-14 17:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! <33

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Kasamizuki [2009-01-14 01:41:27 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I like your character's design. She is very cute. <3 I was looking at the other entries to the contest and I realised that both of ours have the same birthday. xDD

Anyway~ Good luck to you! ;3

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lyneri In reply to Kasamizuki [2009-01-14 13:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh what a coincidence.. Well it's not a big deal

But thanks and good luck to you too! ^^

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alamosh [2009-01-10 20:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice character... Among my favorites for the contest! Good luck!

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lyneri In reply to alamosh [2009-01-10 21:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! ^^

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Krymus [2009-01-10 19:15:41 +0000 UTC]

wowwwwww!!!!! ^^ beauty girl ^^

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lyneri In reply to Krymus [2009-01-10 19:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it

And thanks for the fav too!

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Krymus In reply to lyneri [2009-01-10 19:19:30 +0000 UTC]

no problem, your design is very cool so good luck my friend and have a nice day ^^

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b1-l00zer [2009-01-10 18:41:45 +0000 UTC]

her design is quite beautiful

i loved her clothes

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lyneri In reply to b1-l00zer [2009-01-10 19:03:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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b1-l00zer In reply to lyneri [2009-01-10 20:31:12 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!!

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salamanderFLAME [2009-01-10 18:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm a funny people, maybe she'll like me.

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lyneri In reply to salamanderFLAME [2009-01-10 18:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I think she likes

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salamanderFLAME In reply to lyneri [2009-01-10 18:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Yay.
You've been doing a lot of tan girls lately.

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lyneri In reply to salamanderFLAME [2009-01-10 18:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Cause I like tan girls so much and I'm little tan myself. But I want to be deeper or how do you say that

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salamanderFLAME In reply to lyneri [2009-01-10 18:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Deeper?

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