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Lynnelle — Peripheria
Published: 2007-01-02 17:45:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description I wonder why I have resigned to sorrow
They way a sparrow weeps at night
I always thought he would disappear like other birds when it gets dark
He just stands there and weeps, actually squirms like a little thing

Oh how little do I feel
Little of all the stupid things
All the tiny details that screw my mind

I would wake up, get dressed….
Wait for…nothing
I embrace the rain
Makes me feel alive
A constant reminder of living

I don’t even remember my favorite book
The song I danced too
The words that make me cry

What’s my character like?
Have I lost my conscience along the way?
Following the road that leads to nothing!

No stability
Stuck in a frame
Directed by myself
Maybe some grain along the way
Just to spice up the effect
Edited to fit a capsule

Can you see me?
Or am I just transparent?
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Comments: 15

ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-10 18:21:34 +0000 UTC]

Very inspiring.

Is "Maybe some grain along the way
Just to spice up the effect
Edited to fit a capsule"
a reference to alcohol and anti-deppresants?

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Lynnelle In reply to ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-10 18:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

hehe you can look at it that way...I never thought of it that way but when you mentioned it now it kinda rang a bell

The reference is A film strip or a snap shot from a film. When you freeze the frame, edit it in its mini state and add some "grain" which is an editing effect

But I like your reference as well they're kinda related

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ADDinfusedcreativity In reply to Lynnelle [2007-01-10 19:58:31 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs*
Things can be viewed all different ways.
So what about the 'capsule'?

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Lynnelle In reply to ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-10 20:44:44 +0000 UTC]

The capsule represents my obsession about my thoughts hehe like i want to compress them into a little capsule...my thoughts...my emotions

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ADDinfusedcreativity In reply to Lynnelle [2007-01-10 20:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah.

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Lynnelle In reply to ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-10 20:54:04 +0000 UTC]

hehe I just love the fact that you read and analyze the whole thing and not just stick to the image

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ADDinfusedcreativity In reply to Lynnelle [2007-01-11 04:47:01 +0000 UTC]

*shrug* It's what I do.

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Lynnelle In reply to ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-12 12:45:23 +0000 UTC]

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ADDinfusedcreativity In reply to Lynnelle [2007-01-12 18:15:57 +0000 UTC]

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Lynnelle In reply to ADDinfusedcreativity [2007-01-12 20:26:04 +0000 UTC]

hugs are so sweet

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ADDinfusedcreativity In reply to Lynnelle [2007-01-14 07:53:09 +0000 UTC]

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kounterclokwise [2007-01-04 01:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Man i truly love your writing...

just a little correction from the perfectionist that i am "Have I lost my conscious along the way?"
you mean conscience right?

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Lynnelle In reply to kounterclokwise [2007-01-05 02:07:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh God I just saw it yes i do mean conscience

Thanx for the correction and thank you for loving my writings your comment really made me smile

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corpsebride00 [2007-01-02 17:57:04 +0000 UTC]

"I would wake up, get dressed….
Wait for…nothing"

i used to feel the same way
very well said

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Lynnelle In reply to corpsebride00 [2007-01-02 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!

you made me smile

it's so weird but just waiting for nothing is how I feel and I really don't understand why

But thanks once again

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