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LyricaBelachium — TFA: ninjas poster
#animated #tfa #transformers #jazz #lockdown #prowl #yoketron
Published: 2017-07-28 07:43:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 4978; Favourites: 170; Downloads: 14
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I woke up at 6 am to get this finished on time TTATT my body is deadthis if for TFNation. if there are enough ppl interested and I have left overs, then i'll sell online as well afterwards
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Love this! so simple so beautiful. Nice lineart & shades too ^u^
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[Great as always, man! But you shouldn't push yourself, so try to get some rest afterwards 
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oh I assure you, as soon as its printed, I am hitting the bed
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I really love how you draw TFA characters, and this piece is no exception on that, but I feel the composition here isn't the best possible.
Lockdown is kinda dominating the entire top half picture by cutting a very dramatic dark silhouette in the middle of the sunburst background pattern. Prowl comes close second in terms of presence, but he is maybe situated a bit too low in the canvas, and Jazz is almost entirely hidden by Prowl's outline, so the two of them kinda merge into this single lump in the foreground. In the thumbnail, it took me a second to even notice Jazz was there. Separating the characters so that each has their own visible silhouette would already help much.
Their eyes (or visors as it were) are another big thing that creates presence. Lockdown's red eyes stand out from the mostly blue color scheme without any help and Prowl's visor is this sharply contrasting slash across his dark color scheme, but Jazz' visor is kind of blending into the background. Even the angle aligns with the blue bar his face intercepts. Overall, a lot of Jazz' white parts align with the lighter colored shapes of the backdrop, which certainly doesn't help with his lack of recognizable outline.
This is probably not a piece you wish to rework anymore, but those things might be something to remember as a future reference.
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I can't get enough of your TFA art, aaaahhh~ amazing ! >v<
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ty! I'm so glad
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