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Can see you wanted to do a lot of work on the lineart, but it's too big and pixelize
all around : o
I add the same problem with SAI at first, don't hesitate to add some pen color to correct it :3
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This was probably my first real digital picture. Β I try to work with smaller lines and I'm still improving. xD
Thank you for the feedback, friend. C:
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I love the suit she's wearing, good job
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This is a really striking pose and picture!Β Good job!
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Hello! Nice you got a tablet. I like the design of this, but its obvious you're new to digital art and thats fine :]
Does your tablet have pen pressure settings?
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Alas, I do not think so. Β I think with a lot of my recent digital pictures have been using too wide/big of lines and I'm working on improving that. 
Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Wow, a lot of orange/reddish shades and some black and white.
What's that thing next to her on the right by the way?
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As the artist I should know,
but I really don't know. Β There are some abstract elements to this piece that I think would be fun for other people to see what they think it means. c:
Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Well, it happens to just draw something without even knowing what it exactly is... It still is interesting to see how people will interprete it then.
You're welcome!
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Lovely character! ^^ I can see that she has very unique style and personality, but I do suggest using thinner lines like someone suggested. Also just curious, what are the white lines across her face? I also like the outlines you did around her chest area
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Thank you for the feedback! Oh man oh man! Β I greatly appreciate it!
I would say the white lines symbolize how complicated her mind works and how she sees things differently. Β Sounds kinda cheesy but alas, there it is.
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Ah I see! Hmm, then maybe it would make more sense to put it on top of her head or something?Β
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It definitely could work that way but having it by her eyes stands out more to me I suppose. Β Still, a good idea to keep in mind for future reference or projects!
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Very cool character!
I'd suggest using thinner, looser lines and try adding shading and details
Keep up the good work
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Thank you for the feedback!
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/rolls around with joy
T-Thank you!!
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I've had a tablet sine last christmas. Β I've just finally found a pen right for me and finally figured out how layers work. /sob
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;w; That's so great! Save up for a program!
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Alas, there are not many good programs for the mac.
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