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Kira wanted to try out painting after spending about an hour watching YouTube videos marveling at the awesomeness that is Kidchan.
Then I decided to try my hand at his/ her(?) amazing painting style. So after about dsafasdfZILLION sketches this came out ok.
Obviously I failed miserably at their style , but I think Kidchan would only throw up a little bit knowing they inspired this.
I don't remember who it started as but it somehow became my Nobody Ikarex. :/ I dunno how but whateves. It doesn't really even look like her at all. :C And anatomywut.
Critics tear it apart for me, yeah?
I'll fix it when I get home tomorrow.
EDIT:: Boobies better nao?
If fixededed those and touched up her face some, threw in a rough version of the background just to see what it'll look like. Critique still wanted always.
Ikarex (c) Me
Kingdom Hearts, Nobodies, etc (c) Squeenix
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Breasts looks a lot better now. 
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Yosh!
Yeah, it was waaay to dark before, now choo can see all the big rocky things. Plus Kingdom Hearts. yes. xD
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omg, this is SO gorgeous O___O The coloration, shading and colors... wow, I'm blown away! Hun, this is really an incredibly awesome picture, I love it
Her face is so wonderfully soft and pretty, just like her hair and the skin shading is... deluxe!!
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Yaaaay! -glomps-
I'm really glad you like it. <33
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YUS!
-does the 'I gots approval' dance-
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Those are way better baps than i could do. Very impressed!
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-pauses mid-dance at the blasphemy of an unfamiliar colloquialism-
..'Baps?' Whut? .___.
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..
-headdesk-
I promise that had I been firing on all cylinders I probably would have figured that out.
But anyway.. Nu-uh! Choo draw bewbs waaay better than I do!
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I think this is lovely. I'm not gonna say anything about her chest though, because NO MATTER WHAT, SOMEONE is going to say something about them. I reeaaaalllly like the way her hair is coloured, it's all neat and cool. I wish I could make arts like you.
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Fff, go ahead. xD I don't really mind.
It's just practice. :3 Keep trying, I'm not really all that great and you're already better than I was at your age. Choo'll go far kid.
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Thanks.
I was really talking about my friends about the chest part. x3
Whenever I draw a pic with cleavage, someone feels that they need to say something.
But then again, most of my friends are guys except for Tai. lol
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Thus looks really good! ITs great showcase of your realistic skills. Its stunning coloring as always, but with a new flair. The only things I would fix is how high the background is, its not nessecery and I think it doesn't balance well with just open space. But thats just personal taste, really.
The only thing off on the girl, is the breasts. They look like they aren't attached to her body. I can tell it looks like they are supposed to be pushed up for support, but it doesn't fit well with her robe. It doesn;t really give the illusion that its the clothes, so I would less up the shading on the upper parts.
Sorry for the long critiques, you are really good and you are an amazing artist, and little improvements will make you insanely good!
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Lol I has no realism skillz. This is just animu with a bigger nose.
Yeah, I haven't finished the back ground yet it'll be fuller once I'm done. I just got lazy and wanted help on Rex before I got all done with it and didn't want to work on it anymore.
Yes... Those boobs. -headdesk- She was gonna be sort of grabbing her chest so they'd have been pushed up but I nixed that and didn't quite realize that lift like that isn't possible without help. I will totally be fixing that.
Hecks naw, the more critique the better. I need all the helps I can get yo.
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Oh, ok of the background. lol
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I like her hair-color<3 *v* also the way you colored her skin is extreamly cute in my opinion <3333 amazing work <:
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xD Thanks.
I tried sooo hard on that skin. ;A;
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Ho damn, Kira, I think this might be the best I've ever seen you do!
The only things I can really say need work are her boobs, I think looking at some refs would help (idk how you'd feel about that tho XD). They seem to "pop" out too much, you need a more subtle curve. Above the breasts is exactly a boy's chest, and you don't want that. You can tell a boy from a girl starting just below the collar bone, that's where the swell begins. (srsly, i should know 
Also her arms look sorta lost in her sleeves, I would put a little more shading/folds to show where her hands end, how her arms are slightly bent (unless they're ramrod straight), just to add a little to that part. It seems a little blank.
I hope that wasn't too harsh....and mind this is just my thoughts, you draw better than me so I don't have a lot of room to critique anyway lol
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Thanks. <33
...Those bewbs. -facepalm-
You'd think I'd seen enough bewbs in my life to know how they work, but nooooo.
She's supposed to be pretty flat but originally she had her hands clutching her chest so I assumed they would be pushed up...then i forgot to make them better after I dropped her arms.
Or something... /excuses
Yeah her sleeves are pretty stiff (remember the Org. coats only flapped at the legs, though that was probably just lazy rendering) but they do need more let go and less stripy... -fails at leather folds/ folds in general-
No, no I asked for critique and you gave it. <3 And now the picture will be better for it.
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Lol excuses excuses! I kid, I can see what you mean by her originally clutching her chest. Yeah, Axel didn't have enough sleeve for much movement, but the renderers had no excuse for Marluxia, Vexen, and Xemnas- they all had big bell like sleeves that should have moved with their gestures. (esp. Marly, he gestures with his arms a lot from what I recall).
One has to wonder if they made Axel's sleeves skintight to save themselves the trouble since Axel's around a lot.
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Seriously I literally CRIED during a couple of cut scenes where they coped out SO HARD on renderings. (See: Xemnas pontification scene [all], Scene where ANY EMOTION NEED BE EXPRESSED VIA BODY LANGUAGE!) I kinda understand for Re:CoM 'cause they had to put a SUPER rush on it for the remix but there's really no excuse for such crap from such a well off gaming company.
In my opinion Axel is half laziness half revenge on the fangirls who killed Sora's hair all during the first game.
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I knooooow ;-; Square Enix needs to start putting effort into its' shit again. They're getting cocky >_>
Don't forget a third fanservice for all the yaoi fangirls :3
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Fuck yeah. They should totally hire fans as quality controllers, we'd have them whipped into shape liek that.
Fff. I have no comment on taht matter. -sniffs disapprovingly-
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Oh hell yeah.
"What is that? He looks like he's sneezing, not crying! Fix it nao D:"
"And Riku doesn't always have a pokerface!"
"MOAR FLOWING FABRIC!!"
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ALSO:
'Give Kairi her cool peronality bacl! Even if she is completely usless AT LEAST LET HER BE USELESS WITH ATTITUDE!
ONE RENOA IS E-FUCKING-NOUGH!' D<
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YUSH. I want my spunky girl from 1!
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Damn straight!
AGAIN I cried when I realized the awesome Kairi of old had died and been replaced with a pink wearing Renoa clone. >C
BITTER TEARS!
Le Sigh. At least I got a Namine in return, though her level of awesome was much dulled down by crappy 'plot' writing.
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'LESS AWKWARD HOMOSEXUAL SUBTEXT!'
'...MORE AWKWARD HOMOSEXUAL ADVANCES! LOVE, NOT KEYBLADE WAR!'
'And NO ONE always has a pokerface! 'Specially not the gorram main character who is in pretty much every. Single. FUCKING. SHOT!'
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>D
we would wreck their warped idea of good character interactions and subtlety.
"Kairi gets a hug, Riku gets tears and blubbering? They need to make out already!"
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Fo' sho. >/
And give all the awesome side characters that THEY TOTALLY IGNORED the possibility for AWESOME of moar screen tiem!
And also, we'd have tea with Demyx, bribe Luxord, and make Pirate jokes at Xigbar.
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Yeah, Namine was a'right. But I'd rather have fun Kairi back :/
I wonder, if Enix had known how popular Demyx would become, would they have had him in the game more? Nevermind his death scene being just a little bit lame and abrupt.
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I'm greedy I want cool Kairi AND Namine BOTH living up to their potential. >C Not just as a 'look! They have wemmenz! They CAN'T BE GAY!' foils.
There's still the fan theory that Demyx was faking. Personally I HOPE he was or then I just have no hope for Squeenix OR Nomura's already failing directing ability.
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Mmmmhm, he had more potential than they showed in-game. Fanfiction's still having a field day with him, though a lot of it has degenerated into Mary Sues and sock-puppet canon characters :/
Lol, the girls are only there to give the het fans some leverage in debates.
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I knoooow. Dx It's like a trick corner looking for good fanfiction nowadays.
And apparently he's useless in 365/2 :< This makes Kira sad.
Ffff. True.
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