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Published: 2011-10-14 16:53:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1296; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 9
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All dirty, i know XD hahahah the purpose of this is show its evolution... Humm... In other words i want a critique about this...OH! Also it was made on recycle paper XDD
I´m not a digital person XDD talking about drawings, but i gonna make a try, so... I hope your opinions and views...
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Kazuki Takahashi 1996
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amazing, You pulled it off, coloring the dark areas without ruining the rest of the picture, I like the radiance in pencil shades, and I loved how you drew their eyes 
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Hahahahahha yeah!! It was really hard! XDD But i had the idea... It was a really old one XDD hahahaahhaha but at least, it doesn´t look so bad XDD Hope XDD
hahahha thank you!! You´re so nice!! XDD <333 I use a mechanic pencil, is not so hard with it XDDD THANK YOU AGAIN!!! XDD
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Well, all your work was worth it :thubsup:
and you're welcome!!!
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Hmm, for some reason I really like this. Great job!
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Thank you so much!!! XDD It has a lot of errors, but still; thank you so much!! <33
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They both look absolutely amazing, as always, you did an awesome job! I love all your art!
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Awwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnnn~~~ THANK YOU!!! I don´t know what to say!! <3333
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awww yugi's face is sooo cute!!! X3 and yami's lookin good as always lol
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Hahahahah excellent!! They´re grateful XDD Thank you!
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Hahahaha thank you!! XD I really put effort on it!! XDD
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Well it looks awesome 8D
I'm still trying to draw Yugi-Chan T_T
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Hahhahaha no way in hell!! XD Is a Yami Yugi with giant eyes, and that´s all!! XDD
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LOL XDDDD maybe XD Omg did u just wake up or something? I saw ur journal XD
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It´s just i... I have a bad moment, that´s all XDD I´m very simple XDD
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DAM YOU MABOKU AND YOUR SEXY DRAWINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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Hahahaha Oh! It´s like that!!?? XD lol hahahahaha
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Yeahhh!!!! I wish I could draw like you 
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Hhahaha don´t say that!! XDD You can be so much better!!!!! I´m sure!!
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I am definately trying to be like you!!
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You´re so cute, thank you, and i REALLY mean it XDD <3
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Awww hehe you're so welcome!!!!! X
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the composition seems good, it closes on itself, though i think there could be some element on the bottom left corner to balance is a bit more... that space seems too white for me (but i think that was the intention)... well...
besides that your lineart and shading sense seem to be very good...
as for the problem with dirtying the paper, i recomend you use "varnish" (i don't know the name in english... it is used to fixate the drawing on the paper... in portuguese its "verniz")
there is one thing i'd like to point out... its yugi's arm (the gay in the front) is a little small... i think...
but well done for your work... very good... fave
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Wooow!! THANK YOU!! I REALLY APRECIATE IT!! I think his arm is a little bit short XD but i couldn´t correct it for the graphite excess XD i´m too bad with the eraser XD and it was very late!! TT--TT And, yeah! I also think the balance and the composition could be better, in fact, i was thinking in cut the drawing, and give more emphasis on the faces, thank you!! And,YEAH! I use lacquer or varnish, but as i use a lot of pencil so it finish all scattered XD thanks a lot!!! Thank you for the fav as well!! XDD
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