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somnambulist-x [2010-08-03 06:46:47 +0000 UTC]

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Hi there, I saw this in my inbox and decided to give it a closer look.

I actually don't have much to critique on this... ! The only things are:

I don't know exactly how this seems off to me, but her hand/arm seem way too thin or strangely contorted for the angle - At least her arm would be thicker, and from the wrist down your arm widens... Don't draw two straight lines, it's not natural for the human body.

I would personally accentuate her nose differently - The way it is now imo doesn't come over very flattering - Maybe on the left side of her nostril (our left, her right) you could minimize the length of the line to avoid over-defining it and making a slight inward dented line by her left (our right) eye so that one can tell more that her head is at an angle.

I like the colours, maybe try in the future to go with more complementary ones - Red pops out a great deal with green... But the neutral + cool colour combination is great too. (: Good job, I hope this helps in the future.

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Sun-dancekid [2010-08-21 12:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Really cool! Love how you painted it, left spaces white and then splatter colour on just some details, great picture

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Ikny [2010-08-21 11:50:00 +0000 UTC]

I really like your colours for this, that green is so delicious and works so nicely when mised with the blue. Awesome use of textures also.

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illEskoBar [2010-08-03 06:12:23 +0000 UTC]

I love how the white space draws attention to the apple, and i love the violet undertones

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Cfitzgerald36 [2010-08-03 05:50:57 +0000 UTC]

this is mad. well done. good style!

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TheDriftingPen [2010-08-03 05:49:17 +0000 UTC]

absolutely magnifisant!

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Ascendant-Edge [2010-08-03 05:18:56 +0000 UTC]

It has a simple elegance to it and the colours work well together, nice piece

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