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maequri — Help me figure out whats wrong with this sketch
Published: 2014-01-20 03:20:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 516; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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's character Haliwyn Nettleborne . An extra fullbody pic. for zerro because he AB my adopt. Does this sketch look right to you? Angle, sizes, ect. There is something wrong here but I can't put my finger on it.
OMG my sketches are soooo messy XD
I will delete this later
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ack i uploaded the wrong picture
here's the right one sta.sh/01o05wx0r2hx
gomen!
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i did a red line thing sta.sh/0hax2jai6xm
i think the eye on the right is a little off for this angle
and her left shoulder is a little to high.
also for this angle, i think the floor should be tilted a little more towards the viewer
you can try and change these things and see if they help ; u ; sorry if they dont OTZZ
good luck!! I cant wait to see this picture when it's finished!! It's very dynamic
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Okay I'll try fix it~ & Thank you <3
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maybe angle her chest more to the left, it looks like they are squeezed together by a really uncomfortable bra or something xD
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lol yeah it looks like it and thank you
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; v ;
her right eye needs to bit a bit higher up and her chest doesnt look right but I dont know how to explain it
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