Comments: 37
rhosmarixx [2014-05-26 08:38:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh no! *cries*
*reads rest of story*
YAAAAAY OMG YAAAAY
*cries*
dem feels
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TerraLoba [2013-04-24 01:54:34 +0000 UTC]
I love this story! I hated you at first for killing Xephos, Martyn and Sjin but I love you again! Wonderful job. Made me cry and laugh. So many feels!
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Assassin200 [2013-02-24 03:07:36 +0000 UTC]
I like how this has Lomadia/Xephos in it,because honestly there's not enough of those out there :3
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TheYogCat [2013-02-11 20:28:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow
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sapmakai18 [2013-01-30 02:30:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh gosh! *sniffle*
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rebma97 [2013-01-10 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful_chapter!
Did_Toby_just_disappear_into_the_blue,_or_is_he_this_"Dream"_character?
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Maestrander In reply to rebma97 [2013-01-10 23:33:54 +0000 UTC]
Uh. I honestly don't remember putting Dream into this. Yeah, Toby disappeared (dammit! Ill edit him in) and Dream is Kaeyidream, Martyn's girlfriend.
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rebma97 In reply to Maestrander [2013-01-11 02:18:21 +0000 UTC]
KK,_awesome_sauce.
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British-Hero [2013-01-09 13:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Honestly.... i cried at the beginning ;u;
But i'm so glad... that they are back~ C:
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Maestrander In reply to Vaeolus [2013-01-09 15:52:33 +0000 UTC]
:3 I couldn't let them die forever and ever.
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Maestrander In reply to Ninjaspy49 [2013-01-09 04:16:17 +0000 UTC]
Really? I can write that good?
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Ninjaspy49 In reply to Maestrander [2013-01-09 04:21:10 +0000 UTC]
Yea im shocked you don't have like 5000000000000 comments on how good it is.
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Ninjaspy49 In reply to Maestrander [2013-01-09 04:28:43 +0000 UTC]
I like how it is in Lomadias/ Hannahs point of view (1stperson) it is rare to see 1st around now. It is mostly 3rd
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Maestrander In reply to Ninjaspy49 [2013-01-09 04:42:11 +0000 UTC]
I really like 1st person. 3rd person used to annoy me so much because it seemed the authors were trying to get out of writing the thoughts of the actual person. Now I understand it, it's actually much easier 'specially for Fanfics because I never feel like I can do the person justice. I am working on multiple book series in real life, and I think 1st person really tells the story better than thirds.
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Ninjaspy49 In reply to Maestrander [2013-01-09 12:06:04 +0000 UTC]
OC stories are good in 1st. You get to picture what they think of the people around them.
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Maestrander [2013-01-09 03:30:28 +0000 UTC]
:3
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BrumbyOfSteel [2013-01-09 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeeeey, survival~
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