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MagesHope — Demons

Published: 2004-04-23 21:14:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 224; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 25
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Description Haunted
By demons unknown
Trapped
By horrors unseen

She stands alone
And unafraid
But only
On the surface

Underneath
She's scared
Alone
And tormented

No one to save her
Protect her
From herself
Her demons

They gnaw at her
Tear at her
Destroying
Her mind, her body

Forever alone
And terrified
No one can save her
From her demons
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Comments: 29

RozenMaidenangel [2008-04-18 02:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!Love it!

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Reka-Kata [2005-06-28 16:04:00 +0000 UTC]

is not that from Macbeth? It is good though. Sorry but i'm a flowing fountain of useless knowledge!

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MagesHope In reply to Reka-Kata [2005-06-28 16:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Not that I know of.
Thanks very much.
lol Better'n the Fountain of Stupid. *looks at shirt*

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Reka-Kata In reply to MagesHope [2005-07-14 21:38:21 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

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MacabreKittie [2005-04-10 02:25:41 +0000 UTC]

very nice writing, keep it up

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MagesHope In reply to MacabreKittie [2005-04-10 03:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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bittersuite [2005-01-12 01:57:45 +0000 UTC]

i love it...it is perfect...

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MagesHope In reply to bittersuite [2005-01-12 14:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Glad y' like it.

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bittersuite In reply to MagesHope [2005-01-12 14:59:00 +0000 UTC]

no problem...

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troubledteen16 [2004-06-16 21:46:23 +0000 UTC]

I like it, it's abit weird, not quite like what I do but that's what makes it interesting is that each person has their own style...

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disturbed-creations [2004-06-06 16:12:38 +0000 UTC]

very gothic I love it send more

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MagesHope In reply to disturbed-creations [2004-06-07 03:00:28 +0000 UTC]

will do

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FenrisDesigns [2004-06-06 03:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Creepy. I like your style. ^_^

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MagesHope In reply to FenrisDesigns [2004-06-06 17:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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FenrisDesigns In reply to MagesHope [2004-06-07 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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chiefeagle02 [2004-06-05 22:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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MagesHope In reply to chiefeagle02 [2004-06-06 00:07:54 +0000 UTC]

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boxcarr3421 [2004-05-12 22:10:01 +0000 UTC]

i like it

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MagesHope In reply to boxcarr3421 [2004-05-12 22:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^

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DaNoodleBox [2004-05-11 19:58:56 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem, unfortunatly I'm not terribly good at criticizing (positively or negativley) this style of poetry. I liked it for some reason though! ^^

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MagesHope In reply to DaNoodleBox [2004-05-11 21:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm not the greatest criticizier either, so, yeh. Thanks.

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KatsBrain [2004-05-09 10:26:32 +0000 UTC]

That's disturbing....
I envy you - you do really good poetry, and mine's absolute cr@p.

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MagesHope In reply to KatsBrain [2004-05-09 15:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Your poems are good, too. Don't envy me.

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MagesHope In reply to MagesHope [2004-05-09 18:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Don't see why, but, meh, okay.

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KatsBrain In reply to MagesHope [2004-05-09 16:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, but i still do....

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Integrated [2004-04-23 21:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I can't elaborate, I'm too tired. Maybe tommorow.

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MagesHope In reply to Integrated [2004-04-25 17:25:27 +0000 UTC]

S'all good

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Integrated [2004-04-23 21:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Good.

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MagesHope In reply to Integrated [2004-04-23 21:22:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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