Comments: 6
hallo-poppet [2015-03-11 02:24:04 +0000 UTC]
I love the story! I don't read America x Readers very often (but I do on 2p! America) because my emotions go back and forth on Alfred, but cheater caught my attention (seriously, I was like "Wait....Nope, not a 2p! ....Alfred this sounds more like Al ...hmmmmm.....I WANT TO READ IT WHY ARE YOU BEING CALLED A CHEATER!?") andnow I'm really glad that I did read it! Because it is amaaaaazing
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Floridadaawesome [2015-03-11 01:57:15 +0000 UTC]
Me: Oh wow thats awesome and I love the writing technique! Damn, wish i could write like this again....
Florida: Dude. Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude, give me five minutes with your 'lovers' and your problems will be solved and you can run away together and be happy.
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hallo-poppet In reply to Floridadaawesome [2015-03-11 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I feel the need to respond to this just because I loved yours and Florida's comment! It's awesome!
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Floridadaawesome In reply to hallo-poppet [2015-03-11 02:56:17 +0000 UTC]
florida: CINCO MINUTOS POR FAVOR!!! *flailing*
Me: *squeaks* calm the eff down child! an--
Florida: Of course I'm awesome, i'm way better than Gil!
Me: *frowns* I refuse to bail you out if Gil hears you. Anyways thanks~ I'm glad I'm entertaining someone
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wifefu [2015-03-10 12:14:55 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed your selective diction and the way your writing just flows.
Very wonderfully written story you have here.
I hope you choose to continue.
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