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Maki12 — TFI3 Round 2 entry
Published: 2007-07-14 13:54:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 4745; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 290
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My entry for round 2Related content
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Sweet! I knew it! Thank you, Jo. I'd love to see Spin in part of the TF contest, also.
I'd love to see what you have in store for your friend in the contest as well. You jam.
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Oooh. That's right. Where's my head today? hehe
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The girl on the right in the last panel, is she one of your friends that came back in town
not to long ago. [link]
I'm just wondering. I like the sphere tranformation
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Yes, she is. She is also my entrant into this Tf idol contest.
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Nice work ... though I feel a bit lost there. The girl in the first panel is looking at what looks like a sphere ... magical or something. In panel two, another view and something is happening to her ... then it jumps to the lovely girl with the page boy haircut with something glowing in her hand ... and then the final shot of two girls ... the one from the third and another walking with the first girl inflated into a balloon.
I know this is transformation artwork and it looks good to me. Just from a sequential point of view it seems to leave me a bit drifting with the flow of the panels.
Perhaps I just need to go back and look at the other entry ...
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A lot of it would only make sense if you read the Introduction to round 2, it's balloonium which comes in several types. Green turns the erson into a big round balloon, yellow turns the person into a deflated balloon and red turns the person into a version of themselves just with rubber skin and filled with air.
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If I'd done my homework. I got a note from WarSerebii who straightened me out. Your comments really helped as well. Thanks for the clarification.
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