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Published: 2017-08-26 06:53:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Actually usually I don't upload these , but I usually get a lot of the " coloring is my drawings' saving grace"so I was hesitating that in case I do not color what will my drawings look like , are they really this bad without it ?
I know I had my struglles with anatomy and hands and proportions/ structure , ect...
but I really do practice these...
So to catch the main flow I decided to even put the guidelines layer as well, and I didn't lineart I just doodled with the pen brush in medibang ...
So I thought I would ask the DA comunity for their insight...
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Heyo,
I'm part of the ProjectComment group and that's where I saw this picture.
I saw you were looking for any advice, at least in the base sketch level here of your art. I looked at some of your other pieces to get an idea of what your finished pieces look like as well and I find that you do cloth detailing very well! Even here, in the sketch, you do a good rough outline of where the wrinkles in the outfit should be and you don't go overboard with them. Something I notice that could help improve some things are, with the face on the left, the right eye seems to be falling a bit lower than it should. Raise that up a bit and it should feel more in line with the other eye on the face. One way that I think could help you with this is by drawing three circles, one for the first eye, one that is in between the first and second eye, and one for the second eye. Your proportions for the eyes alone here look great, and on the right image they seem fine, it is just for that close up shot.
As well the arm in the right image seems a bit off. I believe adding a bend in the elbow could help make it feel less awkward and/or raising the shoulder (and thus the arm) a bit higher. Aside from those little things I think this sketch over all looks good! You have a great eye for details and your style is very nice!
I hope this will help you out in some way and that you continue to improve and strive to better your art~!
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i see.. thank you for the advice ~
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Oh,this looks promising. On your right drawing, I think the right face line should be kind of lower and the chin could be put more to the right. On your left drawing, when lifting her arm, something seems odd, maybe try to look into reference more for this as I can't really say about it. But still a good sketch practice.
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thank you for the tips i will try to fix it ~
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Great prportions, look forward to the final
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