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PendulumsKiss [2009-06-15 00:19:09 +0000 UTC]
The first line confused me a bit... o.o I never heard someone say they were "along the sidewalk" so i got this mental image of someone laying next to the sidewalk against the curb. XD im sorry lol.. This is some really lovely symbolism.
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Mandycatz55 In reply to PendulumsKiss [2009-06-15 00:48:32 +0000 UTC]
XD What I do with these kinds of poems, I actually stand outside in the pouring rain and soak myself and find myself inspired XD
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