Comments: 12
ChibiOnerw [2008-08-06 00:53:03 +0000 UTC]
The girl's hand...the fingers should be longer. XD
But the hands are hard to do. ;w;
That's why I hide them in my pictures, sometimes. >w>'
I love the coloring in this one! X3
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mangaluvr12125 In reply to ChibiOnerw [2008-09-03 21:58:16 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i HATE drawing hands...so hard!
but, i figured, "you can't get better if you don't practice!" so..uh...yeah...
it's odd though, i can draw -realistic- hands much better during art class...than i can doing simplified, anime-type hands...
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anime-honeybee [2008-07-05 14:38:05 +0000 UTC]
nah they don't look inappropriate, their expressions and body language make the scene sound as you said, like she thinks he's leaving. I like the guy's look of shock. I think the boy's arm narrows a bit too much at the end, since hands are a bit taller than that in that pose, I think. The shading looks well placed, though I think especially for the girl's skin, the shading could be a bit darker to portray her emotion. overall, nice work^^
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DesertxSnow [2008-07-05 07:13:14 +0000 UTC]
Great job with poses I'll agree! Two things though, if you look at the hand he can see, it's kind of really awkwardly flat... (don't really notice these till you zoom in btw.) and if you look at his hair, instead of them being on the ground, it kind of just "flows through the floor" so... It kind of looks like they're floating... xD;
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DesertxSnow In reply to mangaluvr12125 [2008-07-06 10:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh yus, laziness is the downfall of everyone. xDDD;
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deadricprince [2008-07-05 06:55:06 +0000 UTC]
^^" your artist comments are the shiznet.
(if anyone ever uses that phrase anymore)
anyways... great piece. haha, great explanations. i wish i could be half as grand as yourself... alas, i can only draw mediocre-ly and be a stature in front of crowds.
>.< best night o' mi short life, by the way.
and this just tops it off. thankees.
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