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I realized just a few minutes before deciding to upload this that I should have used star chips instead of coins. >:I I'll eventually re-work the joke to fit that. (PMD uses poke, but PMDU uses star chips, I was in the wrong mind-set. xD )
Team Dragon Fruit's mission begins! No cameos yet, just random pokemon. I'm going to give the cameos I pick more than just a simple single-cell run-by. nn
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That was pretty neat! I do have one thing though, and that is I think your comics run a little fast. I am getting the overall impression, but it feels like events are happening really quickly.
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Do you mean the events in the comic? Or the pacing of the cells? How should I slow down the pacing, if that? As far as the events though, it's going fast because they've walked in on the middle of utter chaos. nn
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I say add more cells, because then you can display more of what is happening. As in like a BANG! so you know that what happens afterwards is a direct result. But it is really already.
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