xfaktor [2003-08-02 02:26:15 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I say, broaden the hips out, and give her more of a longer neck. However, once again, your penciling is very clean, and your detail is nice; I love the detail in the head of the staff, and the drapery of her dress. Her upper body doesn't have to be so long, which is probably why her hips look awkward, but from where I see the thighs, they look to be shapening out well. Keep up the drawing yo!
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barneycool [2003-07-31 21:34:41 +0000 UTC]
good job. the only thing is that she doesn't have much hips at all, try for bigger hips next time too. and it doesn't seem like she has much of a neck either. aside from that you did a great job. *thumbs up*
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