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Published: 2011-05-18 04:42:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 579; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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It's a test of character design based on a variety of GB lore and sources that have collected over the years.One thing you'll notice is that Pete Venkman is based off of Belushi and not Murray.
Ray Stantz is a mix between Aykroyd and RGB.
I'm not entirely satisfied with Egon or Winston. Back to the drawing board for those two. Any ideas?
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Honestly... I know nothing about Ghost Busters at all... I don't know the characters or anything so I don't know what to say about improvement or making the characters look more like they should....
I do love them in this piece though! They look really cute~
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Heh heh... That's okay. <3 Glad you think they're cute.
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Hm. I'm not sure if it's your style, or if you were trying to go for this look, but they all look really young. Like, young teenagers I think. That's what's standing out to me the most right now. They all look really cutesy.
Just sayin'. I'm not sure what to tell you on how to improve Egon or Winston. The one thing that always sticks out to me when I'm drawing Egon is that he has sort of a long, pointy face. In this it looks so round and pudgey, but again, that may just be your style.
bluh bluh bluh long critique bluh bluh make of it what you will.
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I was using 20-something references of the actors. I wanted to see the different effect it might have. I was planning on using something a little less detailed than this for a parody comic, so they'd probably have minimal lines anyway.
Yeah, I think Egon's face came out way too round. I positioned him to be looking down slightly and it throws off the whole piece, since no one else is really doing that.
Winston... I think his face is a little too round too.
Thanks for your super detailed critique. Nice long critiques are far and few in between and I appreciate them.
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Glad I could be of help! C:
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