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NonieR [2012-05-22 06:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

I have a couple of suggestions, if you happen to want them. (If not, just delete this message unread.)

First, you want the severed head to really stand out from the background, rather than being part of an area of similar line weights (head, hand, leg, corpse, boot); give the head a heavier outline and/or shadow, especially on the areas that would be shadowed like the gaps between her fingers. Our eyes pay the most attention to light things that stand out against dark ones.

And secondly, I'd recommend centering her bodice armor on the center of HER cleavage, not turned toward us. 3/4 perspective is one of the hardest things, even for some of the best comics artists (Jim Lee still gets it wrong sometimes, for example), but see how the bikini cup on our left completely covers her breast, while the one on our right doesn't? And that moon-shape in the middle is further on our right than the center line between her breasts? Center everything according to her own turned body, not toward us.

--Nonie

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PennDreadful [2012-05-21 23:57:46 +0000 UTC]

She looks good! That face is intense!

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karaokecowboy76 [2012-05-21 22:08:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome... bloody, but awesome!

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