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Published: 2009-04-08 20:15:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 979; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Redapple-"Oh, god, a worm is eating you!!!!!"Greenapple-"Auch!!!!!, this hurts!!!!!"
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Red apple: [link]
Red apple's face: [link]
Green apple: [link]
Green apple's face: [link]
Worm: [link]
Grass: [link]
Flower is my own resource.
EDIT:
I've decided to make some changes due to some critiques I've received. Please tell me what you think.
EDIT:
Now I added the grass and the flower to focus the attention on the worm. Critiques are welcome.
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Comments: 12
Nice choice of color for the background, this green color really helps for the red apple to stand out while still allowing the other apple to still be visible. Also the apples were cut out well. The shaping of their faces is also good, it helps to show their expressions. The way the face was placed on the apple is done really well. The shadows and reflections make the image more convincing. The whole concept of the worm eating the apple is interesting and applied in a humorous way which is conveyed through the expressions in their eyes and mouths.
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Thank you very much for your comment, it's much appreciated.
Right now I've made some changes to this deviation so if you want, please tell me if you keep on like it. Thank you.
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cool, it looks good
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Worm attacks? It took a while too see the actual worm, there is not much focus on it, but the expressions are very nice and matching the theme at the end e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
I really like the red apple. Her face is just a bit too much to the left, so it is out of the real apple shape, but furthermore it fits perfectly. Only her chin sticks out, but that is not really a problem. However, on the green one you can see a huge flat face that is placed in the wrong direction compared to the way the apple curves, and it looks really horrible! It is like the apple wears a flat paper mask! With this angle of face picture, you might have better centered the face on the apple!
Also, the worm which would now be the main theme does not add much to the drawing.
I really like the way you have been able to make the skin PERFECTLY appleish, well done on that! Especially on the red one!
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Thank you for the comment. I wanted their faces to be placed a little bit away from the apples' shapes to give them some kind of "humanity". I think the green apple's face is too flat, as you said, I think that I should fix that. But the way his face is placed, I wanted to give him a expression of pain.
The worm is horrible, I know.
I'll try to fix it. Thank you for this comment, they can help me to improve my skills, so your critiques will be always welcome.
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This is hilariously epic. The facial expressions are what make it so humorous, although I think RA's face could stand to be a little more shocked; it's like a omg face instead of an OMFG face. A worm is eating GA's brain after all. It's good to see a little perspective there, too.
You can still visibly see where you pasted the faces, more so on GA's face; I'm not too keen on the reflection in the picture, but that's my problem.
Overall I'd give it 4 out of 5.
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Thank you very much for thhis comment. I appreciate critiques because is the best way to learn and to improve my skills so don't worry you didn't scar me for life.
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Thanx bro!! I'm glad you like it
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I think its wonderful. I definitely got a laugh!
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Thank you very much for the comment, I'm glad you've liked it.
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