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Published: 2012-04-14 13:09:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 9664; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 932
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Description MOTHER 3 Time,

Watch the death of your mother,
be neglected by your father.

With Boney the dog
and Lucas the human

The sadness just never ends at MOTHER 3 Time!
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Comments: 82

AnUnknowngirlfromJto [2012-04-16 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]

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The idea is hilarious, but in all honesty, there is something, I would guess, lacking about it. It's probably because you should have added at least one little thing in the background. Also, you have a field, but you don't even put a little sunflower in the field?! It is not striking, or stunning either. It actually looks like this is unfinished. It's kind of sad, really. Definitely not your best work. I'm going to have to rate this really low. So next time, look at the background, because that's just as important as the center piece (s). Thank you.

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Marcotto In reply to AnUnknowngirlfromJto [2012-04-16 21:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... I've kinda did this in a hurry... I did a terrible mistake not caring much about the background, and the logo on top too... I will make it up by making a way better and bigger pic!

Thank you for your critique!

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AnUnknowngirlfromJto In reply to Marcotto [2012-04-16 23:41:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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toontown2001 [2012-04-15 18:41:08 +0000 UTC]

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The artwork is very good, but the arms on Lucas are a bit off. It looks like the Boney is floating. I suggest making a background like with clouds and other Mother 3 references. Also the needle looks more like a sceptre than it does in Mother 3. The grass colouring seems too off than it should I suggest using different shading (even though its adventure time). Every thing else is very good and you should have good pageviews than you should. Both adventure time and Mother 3 teach you a lesson. Be yourself....Tonda gossa Marcotto..Tonda gossa my dear friend.

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valzilla2000 In reply to toontown2001 [2012-04-24 14:31:10 +0000 UTC]

...Bro, that's pretty much the style in Adventure Time. The needle is supposed to be long and pointy... but the bg is pretty bare.

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Marcotto In reply to toontown2001 [2012-04-16 21:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, you're not the first one complaining about the background... I really did a sloppy job with that... I'll work more on it next time...

The arms is a bit too long, but Adventure Time arms and legs are pretty messed so no one pretty much noticed that... but you did. Bravo.

Thanks for your critique!

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FireflyLightMelody [2014-01-19 01:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Hey, this is EXACTLYΒ like MOTHER 3!

Funny and sad at the same time!

The question is...

ShouldΒ I laugh, or cry?

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vgkouvgkou [2013-09-25 21:12:20 +0000 UTC]

haha

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Orangemegaman [2013-09-13 13:15:40 +0000 UTC]

this is funny

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DarkEeveeWolf [2013-04-15 22:34:04 +0000 UTC]

lucas is my fav!! but do you think i should stay on deviant art?

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Marcotto In reply to DarkEeveeWolf [2013-09-29 14:17:37 +0000 UTC]

It's your call really

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DarkEeveeWolf In reply to Marcotto [2013-10-22 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]

sorry, you can forget about my message, its just that no one really commented me on here so i just wanted to know if people actually liked my art. Β  Β 


Β  P.S.

i like your icon. Β (:

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AskTsundereShaymin [2013-04-06 18:43:35 +0000 UTC]

((Nice parody of the actual AT theme song^^))

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Marcotto In reply to AskTsundereShaymin [2013-04-08 16:09:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks tsundere talking bush hedgehog!

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AskTsundereShaymin In reply to Marcotto [2013-04-08 18:31:56 +0000 UTC]

-^-...You're welcome.

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NanoLlamaGaming [2013-02-07 23:32:58 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Mazefire3609 [2012-11-20 00:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Can you also make MOTHER 2 Time with Ness & King? Because it'll be good to have another MOTHER Time too. XD

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Marcotto In reply to Mazefire3609 [2012-11-24 18:59:48 +0000 UTC]

Not a post apocaliptic world

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Mazefire3609 In reply to Marcotto [2012-11-25 04:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww, okay then. If it's really too much apocaliptic to fit, I guess that's why. :U

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Shay-rin [2012-07-06 17:40:35 +0000 UTC]

SLDFKS. XD
SUGOI *--*

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GIRLYGAMER1998 [2012-05-05 15:24:02 +0000 UTC]

A MILLION TIMES YES!!!!!

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RoboGuy9000 [2012-04-17 16:26:44 +0000 UTC]

*Chapter Six*
Boney: Dude are you seriously dreaming about your mom?
Lucas: I AM NOT!!
Boney: Prove it man.
Lucas: Fine, I'll jump off that cliff, if this isn't a dream we'll die, if we live it's a dream!

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Marcotto In reply to RoboGuy9000 [2012-04-20 21:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy, this will be next.

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muhammadin [2012-04-17 15:24:57 +0000 UTC]

ADVENTURE TIME!!! XD

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PK-Gaming [2012-04-16 01:18:54 +0000 UTC]

HOLY MOLY.
Thank you for this. :3

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Marcotto In reply to PK-Gaming [2012-04-20 21:15:40 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome fine sir.

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melikeyart [2012-04-16 00:52:53 +0000 UTC]

............................. XD!!!!!!!!

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Shower-kun [2012-04-15 20:22:33 +0000 UTC]

MOTHER 3 Time
C'mon grab your friends,
We'll go to very, Distant Lands
With Boney the Dog and Lucas the Human
The fun will never end, It's MOTHER 3 TIME! : D

((So original of me /shot. But your lyrics are better! xD))

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Marcotto In reply to Shower-kun [2012-04-22 14:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!

Thank you Mr... Shower?

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Shower-kun In reply to Marcotto [2012-04-22 14:18:38 +0000 UTC]

xDD

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akaidoku [2012-04-15 19:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Oddly Dark story that fits another Oddly Dark story, that both happens in an Apocalyptic Future

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Marcotto In reply to akaidoku [2012-04-20 21:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh boy, more connections!

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LeOnOkOoPa [2012-04-15 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]

AVVENTURAAAAAAAA!!!!! :Q____

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TheOptimisticTravis [2012-04-15 16:03:04 +0000 UTC]

I likethis!~

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ZOMGwingly [2012-04-15 14:18:42 +0000 UTC]

The description killed me.

In more ways than one.

Also, it's about time someone did this. Good job with the style.

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Marcotto In reply to ZOMGwingly [2012-04-20 21:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bunnymoose [2012-04-15 12:46:17 +0000 UTC]

LOL this is soo cute!

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gundamcyclone [2012-04-15 07:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Are you still making the "return of the pig king" comics?

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Marcotto In reply to gundamcyclone [2012-04-20 22:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup.

Updated yesterday after a long time.

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C--For [2012-04-15 02:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, this made my day and night

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Saladchan [2012-04-15 01:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Lucas isn't neglected by Flint... Flint is just a hard worker, so he's not around much. That's common in Japan, but it seems neglectful in other countries.

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Marcotto In reply to Saladchan [2012-04-20 21:20:25 +0000 UTC]

HE GOES SPENDS HIS DAYS TALKING TO HIS DEAD WIFE AND LOOKING FOR HIS MISSING SON.

That's just mean.

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Saladchan In reply to Marcotto [2012-04-21 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Well duh. Nothing bad ever happens in Tazmily, so he figures Lucas should be safe. It's a town of friends. If Flint has to leave, everyone else will look after him.

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Marcotto In reply to Saladchan [2012-05-07 12:55:06 +0000 UTC]

The mayor doesn't give me that idea.

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Saladchan In reply to Marcotto [2012-05-07 18:39:00 +0000 UTC]

The mayor is a dodo-head, and as mean as he is, it doesn't seem like he'd go out of his way to hurt someone... more like he just sits around being a grump all day. Rude, but harmless.

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xrebal [2012-04-15 01:11:01 +0000 UTC]

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LilyLupine64 [2012-04-14 23:48:00 +0000 UTC]

8D SOUNDS LIKE SUCH A HAPPY STORY! 8D
(Oh God their faces I can't look or else I might die of laughter XD)
Excellent job, as always! 8D

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You-Moron [2012-04-14 21:45:17 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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xSakuraRosesx [2012-04-14 19:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice XD

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Dark-Tsubaki88 [2012-04-14 17:01:52 +0000 UTC]

8C

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