Comments: 67
joshwolf999 [2010-06-25 20:05:46 +0000 UTC]
nice comic
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Mewt73 [2010-06-24 18:51:19 +0000 UTC]
it looks really good so far! I like all of it, it's cool, I feel like I could just go to some book store and find this sitting in there. Um. The only thing is like, the panel with Kori and that one taller dude in it, it seems kinda forced, like you just squeezed Kori in there, he's pretty close. Like, idk, that might just be me, so it's not a big deal, otherwise, very very good! ^-^
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Mewt73 In reply to howlzapper [2010-06-25 03:41:08 +0000 UTC]
sorry, yeah. I know he's supposed to be small, I'm just saying it looks like he doesn't fit in there. That's it. And I'm probably wrong anyway, it's great, honestly the whole comic. Keep it up! :3
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jamatuselin [2010-06-23 01:37:51 +0000 UTC]
Me da curiosidad saber, porque vino a este lugar?, pero habrá que esperar para verlo. Me encanta el diseño (sobre todo el del hiel o era cristal?), muy bien trabajado y la historia, muy cómica e interesante.
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jamatuselin In reply to Mari-Limmy [2010-06-23 01:59:56 +0000 UTC]
No, gracias a vos por el manga, tengo planeado hacer uno, pero primero quiero practicar. Mientras, pienso en una historia.
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Mari-Limmy In reply to legendary-SaebaSan [2010-06-22 22:04:01 +0000 UTC]
there must be lots around the internet.... but mostly it's touching and seeing what each tool does :c can't help much there cause all i learned was through ~WhitePhox
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SpacePurply [2010-06-22 02:03:55 +0000 UTC]
hielouuu
los detalles del hielo con el relleno ese de manga, todo el primer panel looks pro xP
y shiro, que paso xD? despues del desmayo, ya se olvido de todo o_o....estara sufriendo la shadownesia? ?
kori le dira su nombre... otra vez?
ese doctor es en realidad el doctor chapatin?
dejare de comentar sin sentido ?
todo eso lo veremos en el sgte capitulo
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SpacePurply In reply to Mari-Limmy [2010-06-22 02:30:15 +0000 UTC]
el chapatin es uno de chespirito (gloogleplz)
y bue de nada :3
...
(ayyy como me requete-encanta esa cara xD)
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SpacePurply In reply to WhitePhox [2010-06-22 02:07:55 +0000 UTC]
xD ya lo sé, lo decia en plan de joda a mari
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Mari-Limmy In reply to howlzapper [2010-06-22 02:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Seh a mi tmb me FASCINO como quedo esta pag *_*
pero la verdad que tanto focus en la gramatica me puso de mal humor.
Yo sinceramente, no quiero desactivar los comments, me parece que asi tmpoco nos ayuda... pero los comments q no digan nada util los voy a empezar a ignorar >_>
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Rnom In reply to Mari-Limmy [2010-06-22 01:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Doesn't howlzapper do the backgrounds? you mention it on every page i think, but i suddenly forgotten D'X ohh!
I wouldn't be able either, the characters alone would take all my effort to do XD
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Mari-Limmy In reply to Rnom [2010-06-22 01:32:04 +0000 UTC]
I drew the castle on the first panel (taking the one he did on the fist page as reference) but that's just a doodle, then he and aiky give it live when they ink and tone it *v*
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Mari-Limmy In reply to Rnom [2010-06-22 02:07:41 +0000 UTC]
nyaaa thank you so much ru-chan
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RaikachanCrafts [2010-06-21 16:16:39 +0000 UTC]
in the first panel where it says "how is him" it would need to be "how is he?"
, next is "I understand it doctor" I think the past form "I understood doctor" would be better... and "hey what are you doing standing there" should be "what are you doing? Why did you stand up and where do you think you're going?" because the orginal sentence sounds a bit weird ^^"
Exept from that it's good, great comic x3
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RaikachanCrafts In reply to Mari-Limmy [2010-06-22 15:48:15 +0000 UTC]
"EDIT: Fixed the grammar.
And for the record: I'm pretty SAD about something like THAT (which takes 5 minutes to do) getting more attention that the art/story (which takes some actual effort). Kinda makes us want to stop doing it. (and I wonder if you go and correct the "engish" from other comics"
Did more people than me point that out, or is it pointing towards me? I didn't want to sound rude... and I like the story and the art aswell =/
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RaikachanCrafts In reply to Mari-Limmy [2010-06-24 19:07:56 +0000 UTC]
ok I just thought maybe you meant me a bit because I was the first one to point it out on that page ^^"
ah I see, well it's a shame that people pay more attention to some translation instead of the hard made art...
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Mari-Limmy In reply to RaikachanCrafts [2010-06-25 00:27:21 +0000 UTC]
yeah, and we really liked how this one had came out so that's why we got kinda upset XD;;
but again, your comment was perfect <3 sorry if it sounded like we were pointing you or something D:
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