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Mariann — Loneliness
Published: 2005-10-13 12:04:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 4380; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 85
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Old sketch..I haven't drawn or painted anything lately so I thought I'd submit some old sketches...
I hope you like them
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Comments: 36
Wonderfull
I have started "Loneliness" contest at ,
to promote new deviants.
You can submit your work for contest. [link]
I need your permission to collect your deviation for Loneliness Pencil Art collection
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thank you, I'm glad you like it
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This is amazing! Very nice gradients and shadow work! Love it!
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I like the shadows and the way you drew the hair
Nice work
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thank you... it's not very tidy though
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Your skill working with graphite is awsome, and this picture shows, again the shading and tonal work is supurb, the right arm bicept looks a (little) bit buldging but besides that the body is in great human proportionality, your a top artist mirian
P.s
In january im starting my 3 year Artists degree in oil painting i cant wait!
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first of all congratulations!!!!!!!!!
secondly, thanks for the comment
and last but not least... It's Mariann! not mirian!
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Very emotional drawing. The pose is excellent. Fine anatomy and lovely shading.
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critique (imho): the shadows on the floor are to pale. compare these with the shadows on the body itself...
nevertheless a very fine drawing!
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yes I know
I was feeling pretty much like the lady in the drawing when I did this and I didn't really pay much attention to the technique... I just tried to express something that was happening to me at the time.... I agree with you, the floor is too pale and the right shoulder and arm looks a little odd compared to the left one don't you think?
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hm, hm.... is drawn under a strong sentiment. have also done some pieces under such a mood. this produces often artwork with strong expressions, as it is here.
i wouldn't say that her arm or shoulder is odd. its a plausible gesture. maybe it isn't perfect from an anatomical point of view, but this is no drawback. it sharpens the emotional expression.
imho solely the pale floor is the area where the drawing could be enhanced.
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I really like how the head came out. The part in the hair is freakishly good. Very cool, the only thing I could say is perhaps some areas should be darker, but that's just my 
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yes, you agree with wholba... and I agree with you both
thanks for the nice comment
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thank you, and thanks for the
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Wow, great use of foreshortening, I love the shading. Its so realistic
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