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Marieon — Blood Piano Legend (Another CreepyPasta?)

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Published: 2016-08-17 14:36:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 464; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description I know it's a doodle, but it's actually a short story I thought of some time ago (Sorry if the grammar isn't that good)
Sorry for the recent spikes of inactivity! Been having school from morning til' night lately    But you can't stop me from making stories, school! :3

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Once upon a time, there lived two twin sisters who loved playing piano.
The elder one was extraordinarily talented, the younger one not so much.
One day, the biggest concert in the entire country was held, and the more gifted sister was invited to play.
The younger sister was a little jealous, she never ever got invited to any concerts.


Well..except the times where she was invited as a "guest" to her sister's very concert, that further rubbed in her face that she was simply not good enough.
To her shock, her elder sister asked her so casually, "Would you like to take my place?"
Be it out of kindness, or out of pity, the younger sister quietly accepted the offer due to her hunger for recognition.
"No one will even notice, we're twins after all!"


These words echoed in her head as the younger sister took the stage that evening.
Her gentle fingers glided along the piano keys, a soft melody embraces the crowd.
However, her fingers started to hurt more and more with every chord she struck, and every key played became more and more sluggish.
But being adamant about finishing the piece, she continued to play, for this was her once-in-a-lifetime shot for fame.

Blood started to stain the piano from her delicate fingers, yet she continued to play.
What was once distinctively black and white keys, are now a muddle of homogeneous red.
Yet,..she continued to play.
The audience sat far from the stage, entranced by the perfect melody.


She played the last keys of her song, the audience roared with applause.
She then took the last breath of her life, and collapsed onto the floor.
That night, her family grieved for the loss of their beloved daughter.
Her elder sister smirked, whispering under her own breath,

"Hehe..they'll never know..the countless minuscule poison needles and pins I've planted within the piano keys that evening.
Father and Mother never ever loved me as much as they did love you, I have all the skills and talents, but only you got "love".
Dear sister, I've now given you what you've always wanted! A chance at the spotlight, "recognition and fame"!
But now I shall also take away your share of "love"."
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I know this one isn't nearly as creepy as the other one, but has a more "yandere" feel to it ^^
You could say that she was a..prick!
Anyway, feedback is welcome and hope you have a nice day
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