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Published: 2012-12-30 17:09:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 3204; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 11
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TFA version:tfelita.deviantart.com/art/TFA…Bio:
Name:Jessica (Jessie)
Age:20 (Humanized Age)
Gender:Femme
Vehicle Form:Jet
Allies:Megatron, Starscream, Knockout (Lover), Breakdown, Soundwave
Enemies:Airachnid, Dreadwing, Skyquake, Optimus Prime, Bumblebee, Arcee, Bulkhead, Ratchet, Wheeljack, Smokescreen
Weapons:Arm blade
Mother:Starscream (Starscream is not real mother of herself. She don't know her real mother.)
Father:Megatron (Megatron don't like Jessica. Because she is not Starscream's daughter.)
Jessica Belongs to me
Edit: Please calm yo tits.. I didn't really kno some of the informations bout TF.. Now I know everything. Stop judging it's embarrasing.. U don't need to break people's heart you can say it in kind words.. U don't need to swear or blame me for nothing.. As you can see it's old. Please be polite and be polite in the comments too.. U don't need to show yourselfs bad..
You judge me bout the name too but I don't really care. It's old and I don't want to change anyhing except her age thing.. And I won't change her name.. Because everyone uses human names.. So why not me? (WARNING: EVERYONE MEANS SOME PEOPLE. DON'T JUDGE AGAIN)
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Comments: 66
Interesting in what way?
Cute name indeed
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Well Swiftica is a seeker. Jessica here looks like a type of seeker. They have the same parents too, only my character is Starscream and Megatron's metal and energon. They foo have many differences, like Swiftica has long hair and is a triplet. but other then those they are very similar. Swiftica's name is based on the popular name Jessica.
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Yeah they are very similiar.. That's weird XD
And yes Jessie is a seeker. And also she has Megatron's weapons. And I drew her body so big.. But actually it's a bit smaller XD
I saw your OC. She's cute like her name :3
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Thank you! When people first saw her, they complained about her hair but I don' give a slag. my character my rules. x3
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Yup.. Like they did on my OC.. "HER NAME IS NOT CYBERTRONIAN, HER HAIR LOOKS LIKE HUMAN HAIR, THEY CAN'T HAVE AN AGE (I already know that, I wrote it and it means her humanized age -.-)
I don't really like cybertronian names that's why I named her Jessica.. I don't know why they judge us though.. AND YES MY CHARACTER MY RULES XD
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x3 My character has two sisters. Teleblitz and StormScorch. They are named for their abilities
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Two sisters? I see about StormScorch.. But what is Teleblitz's ability?
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She is like Skywarp but faster. She can teleport anywhere she wants without a delay between warps.
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Whoa XD Why did I never thought of that ability XD
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Wow cool.. Liked your name bro!
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Wow this is great! love her colors and design!
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Thank you very much
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*casually scans through comments*
*sees that you drew this with mspaint*
*looks back at drawing*
Holy crap this is good~!
Did it take you a while to draw this? :0
--Her design is really cool btw.
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Thank you I drew it in two days. Why do you ask?
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You're welcome~
Well because.. it looks so.. neat! : D
The lines look perfect.
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Yes.. I'm always used Microsoftpaint.
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Thats impressive XD usually everyone uses PS or Muro or other programs..ive never seen poeple that are good artists and use MS XD this is amazing!
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THANK YOU VERYYY MUCHH! You can browse my gallery..I want other programs.. But I'm good at MP
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Well i wanna be impressed, and judging by your gallery, you sure have came far X3 You get a watch, and a Lamma badge. ^^
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THANKS SO MUCH! And you get a watch and a Llama badge too
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What's with the 'hair'? Might want to see this link and this one for the canon relations, and this one because of the name.
And then these two because of the age.
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honestly i dont find your comment necessary. Everyone has their own style. Mabye her name in real life is Jessica or she just really likes that name. The age may be in human years. and so what about the cannon relations? my ocs dad is starscream in fact i know tons of people who have cannon characters as their "lover" or ocs parent. honestly i find it quite annoying that you always put people down because "their characters name isnt cybertronian enough!" or "ohh your characters parents are cannon characters!" and if you dont like the design and what she is like THEN DONT COMMENT!
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.... " Mabye her name in real life is Jessica "
what?
Plus Cybertronians don't have human names. They come from OUTER SPACE. Don't you think a acient race of aliens would have different names than those of us on Earth? The name " Jessica " isn't cybertronian enough.. it's not cybertronian at all. Plus Starscream as a dad? There are no canon relationships Starscream is in ...so.. I suggest reviewing this character's Bio hun. The hair would make more sense if it looked more robotic and less human btw
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If her IRL name is Jessica, then that plants this OC squarely in the realm of "self-insert".
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So an honest critique is once again hate just because I don't like something about it? Honestly, people. It's not hate!
First off. Did you check the links? It's very thoroughly explained. If you want people to even take your OC half-seriously, then you need to stick to canon. Cybertronians do not have human names!
And there's nothing wrong with canon relations...as long as you're sticking to canon and not just doing it for show. "Oh look at all the canons I'm related to!one11!one I must be amazing!11!!!!1"
Also, is she literally 20 Earth years old? That would place her as Sparkling. Essentially a newborn. If that's the equivalent age, then she needs to say so.
Not to mention there's no point in 'hair' beyond KAWAIIDESU!
For pity's sake, dude. Grow up and actually read the resources given in a critique.
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yes as a mater a fact i DID read the resources and honestly what does kawaiidesu have to do with this? and if you think that peoples ocs cant have human names then be my guest to go tell all of those people who do that. and how do you know if she is doing the cannon relations for show or not? and again 20 HUMAN years. not CYBERTRONIAN 20 years in human could translate to I dont know like 160038287 steller cycles in cybrotronian.so you are the one who should grow up and read and think about it before you comment.
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SKYBLUE, calm yo tits.
I realize SkylerFarrier wasn't exactly sugar-coating her post, you have no reason to explode at them. She has every right to comment on the posted OC, because she is entitled to her opinion, this OC was posted on the Internet, on an art-sharing website, in public. Everyone can see this OC, and everyone has the ability to comment on them. Just because you don't like what SkylerFarrier has to say doesn't mean you have the right to get pissed off.
Seriously, though. Step back from your computer, take a deep breath, and THINK before you post again. Grammar-less run-on posts white-knighting for your buddy won't help your argument.
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Yeah she should be kind too. But Skyler-Farrier isn't really POLITE at all. It's my gallery. She should look at herselfs. If she doesn't like it why does she comment? There is a rule at my gallery ID.
I don't comment her's like that so she has nothing on her hand to talk to me like that.. I'm just saying no need to be mad.. (And I'm still kind to her...)
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...I'm not on a computer... I'm on my IPod.. and i dont even know her! I just enjoy peoples work and when i see something that sounds like an insult I defend peoples work. Is there something wrong with that? And trust me im not getting pissed. Not even close if i'm pissed i start swearing
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Computer, iPod, Droid, whatever you use to post with. Some of what SkylerFarrier pointed out isn't insulting - it's actual critique, if the creator is open to listening. What you did is storm in and pick a fight over something YOU thought sounded insulting.
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Sue. She's only got the traits to emphasize how grimdark-hardkoar-"Pity me everyone!" her OC is. It's ridiculous.
Oh, sure they can. People just laugh at the idiocy. If you want to be taken seriously, do some research. Don't just slap a human name on it. That's just screaming 'self-insert'. And I've read the fanfiction. Self. Insert. Sue. Special Snowflake. She needs a beta desperately. Almost as much as you both need a reality check.
If she's 20 human years, she's a baby. For her to be the equivalent of 20 Cybertronian years would make her a young adult. And yes, it would indeed be at least a million stellar cycles in TFA [it's got solid age-equivalent and lifespan information] and a couple thousand in TFP at least. As is, she's only got a sparkling OC. 20 Earth years is a child. Get it through your thick head.
Heh. I find this very amusing. Coming from the one who's response is all babble and makes very little sense? Considering I can use proper grammar and sentence structure...
I really didn't expect some random White Knight rushing to defend her sullied honor to understand this.
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