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Published: 2004-03-10 23:38:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description You looked me straight in the eyes.
My stare did not provoke a recoil.
My heart stopped beating,
in your presence it became inconsequential,
what was blood, veins, clumsy quivers and pulsations,
when you peirced me,
pinned me to the floor.
You redefined my perception of life.
I feared you, initially,
not for your feirce eyes or stoic stance.
You saw me as i wished to be seen,
real, and flawed.
I was stunned.
Not lost in your eyes like so many others who caught my attention.
You were not baffled by the fact that i caught yours.
You were not afraid,
and you continued to stare.
I did not squirm or fumble,
I did not look away.
I would have, had it been anyone else.
So we stood like that,
fixated on one and other for what seemed like a lifetime,
of a life we had only dreamed of.
We were inseperable,
as our knowledge of one and other exceeded the knowledge we posessed of ourselves.
Your eyes were black.
Mine were gold.
It was only natural to fall in love,
and we kept staring,
inhaling,
exhaling,
In a harmony unmatchable.
Soulmates in seconds, of inconceivable silence.
As we both turned our back on our newly discovered utopia,
exiting through opposite doors.
Colliding in love,
a broken heart conceived,
and not a word was uttered.
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Comments: 7

Image-Ninja [2004-03-11 06:15:31 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

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markomyluv In reply to Image-Ninja [2004-03-12 03:20:32 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks! love the clapping hands!

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stiflersgirl [2004-03-11 02:36:59 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem, i love the descriptions and imagery.... amazing writing, keep it up!

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markomyluv In reply to stiflersgirl [2004-03-11 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks so very much!

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stiflersgirl In reply to markomyluv [2004-03-11 03:43:02 +0000 UTC]

not a problem!

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mikey1331 [2004-03-11 00:41:42 +0000 UTC]

wow! Great job! very emotional

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markomyluv In reply to mikey1331 [2004-03-11 02:32:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you! it is always nice to hear from you.

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