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Published: 2003-08-18 02:28:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description Lying there, the blood disperses.
Whimpering, trying to see your life flash before your eyes.
Blank.
The bloods filling in the cracks in the pavement.
The emptiness in your mind however, still remains.
You’re looking for a loved one,
Anyone…
But there is--no one.
You’re pooling your thoughts together in hopes to find a key.
All the meanwhile the blood is pooling underneath your faltering tool.
Conscious, but completely detached you breathe slowly.
Resigning yourself from the earth beneath you, not as though you were ever united.
No one to whisper good-bye too in a shaky voice,
Before the last breaths leave you.
Nobody to cry over losing someone as beautiful as you.
No one to hold your hand and stroke your matted hair.
Because,
No one cares.
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Comments: 4

shelcatzoe [2003-08-20 22:51:56 +0000 UTC]

*deep breath* wow....that is very powerful...to me anyway...i love how it is written...the emotion put into it...it's very good. i feel like that sometimes....i can relate...

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markomyluv In reply to shelcatzoe [2003-08-20 23:11:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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militantinsanity [2003-08-18 04:57:58 +0000 UTC]

well done! i really like it, and know exactly where your writing this from... well done! Chouette!

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Life8Lost [2003-08-18 02:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Yea it all hurts pretty bad doesnt it? I know where you're coming from, except now I'm afraid of dying old dem scary old people, scary to think I might be one, one day heh

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