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Published: 2006-04-23 14:56:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 497; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 240
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this is my 2nd lp ever... and im not too happy with this result, but w/e...if u have any tips, post it here please... i need improvement x)
but anyway, hope u all like it.
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I think this piece needs refinement. I think the first thing you might want to remove is the border.. it doesn't really add to the image.. in fact i would like the piece more without it. The second thing you might want to improve on is your typography, smaller typography that is placed closer to the focal point works very well i think. Other then that, the image as a whole isn't bad, you just need to maybe use blurs more carefully and go easy on the sharpening and saturation.
I hope your work benefits from this.
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fuck thiss....
mtfkaaa... euehuehe 
one word: AMAZIIIING!
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