jpbluffrat [2008-08-11 02:24:45 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful model... Pose looks good. I would suggest however, that you attempt to have the model maintain eye contact with the camera. It conveys so much more to the portrait, and makes it that much more effective... Also - You might try messing with the colour and saturation in your processing program (Try adobe Lightroom!) There's just a little something about her skin tone against the bench that doesn't quite work, makes it look almost like a mannequin's skin... But other than the color issues - excellent portrait, it's lit quite well. I like it!
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