Description
Show Vetru speaking to the esk, greeting old friends, or meeting new visitors. What kinds of esk are visiting? How does Vetru feel about the gathering? How do the esk feel about seeing Vetru? Has the esk met Vetru before? Have they brought a gift or some interesting news? Vetru must be included in the scene.
Previous artwork:
Awan moved forward through the grassy hills, unsure about his next encounters. For the first time he traveled that far from his boundary, the safety of trees, bushes and labirynth of the river. Meanwhile, the sunrise began to paint the green mounds with all the contrasts of the morning. There was, however, an unusual teal glow, timidly peering from behind of the nearest hill.
Awan's eyes opened wider, releasing the purple flash. He decided to investigate, but his heart was racing. What was it? He never experienced such mixture of feelings, both curiosity and uncertainty. His paws kept bringing him closer, his enchantment intensified, dispersing gently on the morning breeze.
Eventually, he stood eye to eye with a source of strange light.
- Who are you?
Awaiting the answer, he raised his quills, and the glow of his eyes flashed.
- I'm Vetru. I'm... the Wanderer. The Wanderer of those lands.
Vetru's eyes focused strongly on Awan's bright gaze. There was something familiar about this glow, something... they both shared.
They stood in awkward silence for some seconds, until finally Awan wittingly tilted his head. Vetru straightened, trying to cover up their abashment, and continued:
... and who are you?
At the sight of confused Vetru, Awan's uncertainty vanished immediately.
Uneasiness turned into a double portion of curiosity, with a pinch of his usual perkiness:
- I'm Awan, the wanderer from far away lands.
This slight repartee took Vetru completely by surprise. But the bold, out of the blue answer sincerely amused them.
Their dignified voice took a noticeably playful tone:
- Would I be privileged to show you my kingdom, o-mighty wanderer from far away lands?
Oh boi I've decided to do a small writing. Hell, since I'm no writer, I apologize for any inconveniences from reading it I didn't want to repeat the words all the time, so I used translator for some sophisticated stuff. That might cause it sound a bit weird, if it does, I'm sorry ;A;
Scoring:
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body Bonus)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+1 AP (Enchantment: 1 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+20 AP (Event Bonus)
+20 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 2)
+5 AP (272 words)
Total AP per submission: 111
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+1 GP (Enchantment: 1 GP * 1)
+10 GP (Event Bonus)
+2.5 GP (272 words)
Total GP per submission: 23.5
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Comments: 28
Junsui-na [2018-07-10 00:44:30 +0000 UTC]
the colors are stunning!! and I love the body language of the poses and the way Vetru's fur is painted. beautiful job
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Martith In reply to Junsui-na [2018-07-10 16:21:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! ♥ ;w;
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aracollie [2018-07-07 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]
OMG, alll of this is so GREAT!
I love how the story match the image and the conversation between Awan and Vetru is so... moving and emotional <3
you did it wanderfully ;^;
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Martith In reply to aracollie [2018-07-07 23:35:32 +0000 UTC]
Awwwh thank you so so much ;^; <33
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DarkBachuru [2018-07-06 18:07:33 +0000 UTC]
Love this!
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mazepla [2018-07-06 10:28:57 +0000 UTC]
gorgeous!! I guess you might spent many hours on this.
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Martith In reply to mazepla [2018-07-06 12:11:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I think I've spent around 3h in total, but I took a lot of breaks so it's hard to say. ; )
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Aleerajewelart [2018-07-05 19:59:40 +0000 UTC]
So, Beeeutiful 😍
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Ffaunax [2018-07-05 18:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Aaah, this turned out so well! I love the colours so much <3
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Martith In reply to Ffaunax [2018-07-06 12:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you so so much ♥
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Effloret [2018-07-05 18:11:54 +0000 UTC]
Ugh i love the details and Vetru's freaking mane is glorious! Love how you did his markings to !!! And that BG ;_; goals
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Martith In reply to Effloret [2018-07-06 12:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I spent so much time on this mane just to make it look right, it took inapproprietly large amount of time XD thank you so much ♥
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Caliki [2018-07-05 17:54:32 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous piece, I love how you guide the viewers eye in this one, great work <3
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Martith In reply to Caliki [2018-07-06 12:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much aa <333
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CougarHearted [2018-07-05 17:44:01 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely LOVING the purples, greens and blues that the background possesses!!!!!!! *_*
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Phoenix450 [2018-07-05 17:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Aaa this is so pretty Marta, beautiful work! <3
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bluewingfairy [2018-07-05 17:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Marta, nice story, they are amazing, their poses!!!!.
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Fizzy-Sweets [2018-07-05 16:58:53 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SO PRETTY
YOUR ART IS A GOAL
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