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Round Two of and I had to draw Artorius's profile, including expressions and information on his personality and physical details.I hope this suffices.
Artorius Revana is my character.
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The four temperaments at the top aren't emotions. They're supposed to be different personalities different people could have.
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Really? Oops. Sorry.
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Wow he looks very strong! It makes sense for his occupation though. Nice job on his expressions too.
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Well I think it my just be your style but he doesn’t look very realistic. It might be good to look at some references from real people and see if you can tone down some of the shapes of his muscles and make them look closer to real life.
That’s all I’ve really got though, and it might just be a style preference. So it’s up to you.
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Well he's a big beefy fellow ain't he. He most certainly lifts.
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No prob. I'm a fan of buff characters.
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hehe of course~
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Ohh if he doesn't fight to the death, it's explainable why he looked to fierce in the Guess Who task but he isn't truly blood-thirsty. And now I see how he can be that determined fighter and also gentle and reserved. I see you named his emotions after the four temperaments theory - I found that a bit strange so now I'm curious, what kind of temper predominates?
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Usually phlegmatic, if I am honest.
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Oh, a gentleman gladiator? To be honest I don't know what it mean. 
Also, why is he two and almost half meters tall? Does he come of some other species? How tall are his arena oponents?
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No no. The gladiatorial bouts are non-lethal. Expect lots and lots of bruises and wounds, though.
As for his height, he has gigantism and underwent extensive surgery and physical therapy to compensate.
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A gladiator? That's so cool!! Reserved and Gental, not things I would think a gladiator would be.
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He doesn't like scaring people outside of the Arena.
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So he is a gladiator, right? 
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He is, indeed! As to how he took it up, he was raised by a woman who owned and ran an Arena, where his parents had worked before they disappeared. As for his size, he actually has gigantism, and underwent extensive surgery and physical therapy as he grew up. The muscles... you could say they were a consequence of said therapy, in addition to his training.
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That's pretty cool!
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He is also remarkably agile as well for his size! As for life outside the Arena, it's doubtful he did. He was surrounded by Gladiators from his first months. By the time he could walk and talk, it was all he wanted to be.
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Was he always this big? I don't imagine this being his natural body, is it?
Hmm, do you want critiques? Just say no after I give my say on this and for the next set of artworks I won't critique.
The expressions are shown good. I understand each one of them. I like them. But some people might not understand what choleric, melancholic, phlegmatic, and sanguine is. I would put it in either artwork or in the description, giving an example of what they mean.
The artwork seems very... basic. Maybe it feels that way because I'm more so used to drawings that show lot of shadows and lights. Like I see some of them there, but not really enough of them. Unless you're not going for that kind of artstyle, just keep on going with this. Also, is the bigness of his body parts supposed to be exaggerated, like those guys in Warhammer 40K?
Overall, good job.
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In-universe, yes.
Fair enough. I just wanted to be clever about the expressions and yes, his musculature is meant to be exaggerated.
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Ah I see. Good to know, thank you
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Thank you! Any critiques?
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Yep! A second heart was surgically implanted into him to compensate.
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