Dkelabirath [2010-07-18 16:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Odd jump between this page and the last.. perhaps another page with the zombie slowly creeping up behind them, and the viewpoint switching between them and it, would work better in comic timing?
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Marvellyous In reply to Dkelabirath [2010-10-06 17:38:47 +0000 UTC]
I think you might be right. Currently prodding matt to write some another page of dialogue to add in so that I can see how it looks if I make the zombie creep up on them
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