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marvelousmavis — One Red
Published: 2013-09-23 15:44:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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As petals fall from that one red
I get this feeling I was misled
I've been through a long road of thorns
I have had enough of weeps and mourns
As petals fall from that one red
I get this feeling I was misled
I've been in this path of circles
I have this dire need for miracles
As petals fall from that one red
I get this feeling I was misled
In and out this valley of love
There's even a cage for a white dove
As petals fall from that one red
I get this feeling I was misled
In a dark place where casket grows
And all these stones are lined up in rows
As petals fall from that one red
I get this feeling I was misled
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Comments: 2
Excellent...I love your use of repetition...I thought you might want to know that your second to last "as the petals fall from that one red" is missing the 'e' in 'red'...otherwise excellent poem!
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thank you so much!
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