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Published: 2017-01-05 17:41:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 428; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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She's my second furry OC
A faun with vitiligo, which I've always found beautiful~~
I posted a speedpaint of her on my youtube!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bp8lg2…
My FurAffinity page is here: www.furaffinity.net/user/marzi…
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Comments: 8
This is very cute. She looks playful and, almost, bashful
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everything looks fine in this picture
the only things i can say is that the hair does not really fit in
and you don´t need that shadow effect on the right side
and add somemore shadow below her head
she is very beautiful
enlighten her !
That´s all - great work !
I´d recommend you this link: letrasetblog.com/manga/basics-…
Keep up the good work!!!
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That link is awesome! I always try to watch tutorials if I'm unsure how to approach something but I hadn't been able to find any on youtube. This is great, thank you so much!
Looking at it again you're totally right, if I add deeper shadow on her neck and collarbones I can emphasize her face more~
I appreciate you taking the time to comment on my print! She was one of my favorites to draw
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Really no problem - you´re welcome!
Keep up the good work
She´s really awesome!
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Hi! I'm here from ProjectComment to give you a constructive comment on your piece!
I'll start by saying that you nailed the anatomy! The right hand and forearm are exeptionally good, and so is the musculature on the left shoulder and stomach. I also like the little ringlet of hair coming down on her shoulder.
You obviously studied deer to make this drawing: her face looks exeptionally doe-like. Her eyes are wide and soft (I like her heterochromia) and her nose is super cute too!
Her ears are kind of weird: deer have log, rounded, spotted, furry ears that come out of the sides of their head www.hudson.oh.us/ImageReposito… ; these ears look more like elf ears, albeit weird ones. They don't seem to fit the picture.
Her colour seems a bit off to me too: if you look at pictures of deer, you'll see that they have a more golden shading to them, and lack the purpleish undertones you gave your fawn. In general, normal deer colouring ranges from reddish brown to a light sienna (kind of like her shirt). Deer also have markings in specific locations, which are the ears and back. Their stomach is usually a uniform off-white/beige.
The same thing could be said for her hair: if you go by human anatomy, hair (on the head) is only a shade lighter than all the other hairs, so her hair should actually be lighter than her fur (that is, if she's actually covered in fur-it's kind of hard to tell).
I can't tell if she's wearing pants, or if that is actually fur, as usually depicted in fawns. If it is fur, then I would suggest taking a look at pictures of long-haired animals (goats especially) and carefully note down the texture.
Finally, while I do like simple backgrounds, the colour here doesn't seem to fit. I would have opted for green, acqua or gold, not purple (purple gives off a toxic/dangerous/stormy sensation). I do like that branch coming off the trunk though.
That's it from me! Keep up the good work, and have a nice day!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to critique it!
She is my own take on a faunus with vitiligo, which I really should have specified in the description - I should have written a description, period! - but absolutely the ears ahd hide texture came out weird like you said, along with her hair. I'll be reposting this print after I give it some editing. Thank you for the advice~!!!
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