amade [2005-08-20 19:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Either that's hi-density carbon kinda steel of blade or it needs some highlights for contrast. If you look at metallic things, they're not really grey. Especially if it's reflective, you'd see bands of dark shadows and highlights.
The hands look paralysed and dehydrated.
My biggest gripe would be your usage of 100% black to denote something that's black in colour. If you really observe the black things around you, they always reflect back some light. The trick is to give it a gradient kind of look and using some dark cool colours like violet or aquamarine for tinting. Even black cooured materials would have highlights, midtones and shadows.
If it weren't for the stick and dead leaves in the left foreground, it would've been quite nice and believable.
A bit on your character background as well, you seem to always come up with a character that has had a really tough past or skeletons in the closet(s). Just wanted to point that out.
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Masako-kun In reply to amade [2005-08-20 19:21:12 +0000 UTC]
I know they do tend to have a tough past, I guess I tend to find that a bit more motivating for my characters. Kinda pragmatic you could say.
As for the background, like I said, this is experimental and I should be a bit more aware of the material in the picture. Thanks for the comments.
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