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It looks like her index finger is intersecting with the thumb and there's part of a finger behind the feathers that I'm not even sure where it belongs to. The render itself is pretty good but you might revisit the hand.
Since the top and bottom of the bow are out of frame, you might be able to use two bows in the scene to simulate drawing of the string. Put transparency on the foreground string and transparency on the background bow.
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The character expression and lighting are wonderful, but what's with the pose? I think it detracts from the overall image. Bow and arrow in hand, yet not nocking the arrow, arrow grip all wrong, and looking away from the flight path. Might as well eliminated the bow and the arrow.
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