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TruMint [2017-04-19 13:57:11 +0000 UTC]

I really like this drawing, though I have gripes with it First of all, the posture seems a bit off. Lazari on the far right seemed to be a bit slanted, and if you looked at the posture under the dress it would look like she was unnaturally thrusting forwards with her hips. I find this in a lot of art, and it really does bug me. It can be easily fixed with a straight line, and more concentration on keeping the character upright. When I do this, my mind normally drifts and I don't realise I'm doing it until it's beyond the point of no return. The feet also seem to be pointing 45 degrees into the floor, which also bugs me because it's unnatural. On the figure in front, I really like it. The hair seems to cling to the chin and cheek, though, and that's pretty unnatural and ignoring gravity. I kind of don't like the colour, either, and I think a lot more effort could be put in both figures overall. It really shows that it was coloured with almost no regard for shading, and hasn't been traced over or redone with as much effort as there could of been. The figure behind also had a weird eye size, and the fact it's over the hair really distracts the audience from the rest of the art. They also look a bit awkward, with the eyebrows being off. A lot more shading could also be used, as it looks very 2-D at the moment. There is a lot of potential here, so I implore you to keep developing your art. 

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